Comment from jannieballiett

Excellent

Beautiful, girl, beautiful.

A sunrise and sunset, is so peaceful and appreciative, and full of hope for tomorrow....I love this poem, awesome. ;-)

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2005

Comment from Louanne

Excellent

And when I stop dreaming
I'll know that I
stopped living
in this place and time.

Dreams in the sense of hopes
for the future have an important
place, but I am not sure about
which dreams you write.

Dreams to sustain. As years
go on, I feel a move toward reality.
I don't know exactly what I mean
here, but I will leave it.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2005

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

An inspirational and beautiful poem Jewell.

Everyday is a new day, a new beginning-as you say one sunrise at a time.

I love your wise and hopeful words.

a wonderful photo.

May your dreams always sustain your precious soul.

Bye for now.

Best wishes Peter

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2005

Comment from spades1

Excellent

What an inspiring package that this one is, thank you for sharing anotehr great poem. The imagery here is great nad I love that accompnaying picture. Of course your flow is magnificent also but then I expected nothing less.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2005

Comment from Graceheart

Excellent

Hope is a wonderful thing it gives the heart a light to search for! It may also devistate at times when too much of it is place on another soul! However this is a beautiful poem and so touchingly true! Wonderful images and flow! Perfect in every way! I hope that you find the treasures your heart seeks because life is too short to waste it on dreams and unreachable love! Awesome Jj! Awesome!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2005

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

beautiful!
great message and totally understandable and relatable
terrific pic... goes great with your poem

very nice work
thanx for sharing :-)

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2005

Comment from Mrs Jones

Excellent

And when I stop dreaming
I'll know that I
stopped living
in this place and time

So true. Lovely inspirational verse Jewell.
Good flow. I can find no error
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2005

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

this is you in other areas
and those other areas are good
your talent lies in muti faceted areas
for this is another outstanding poem
thank you.....John

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2005