Dance of the Snowflakes
Nonet entry for the Personification of Winter Contest12 total reviews
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful post. I loved getting two poems for the price of one. Both are marvelous. I really appreciate teh one in the picture, it is very imaginative.
Barbara
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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This is a wonderful post. I loved getting two poems for the price of one. Both are marvelous. I really appreciate teh one in the picture, it is very imaginative.
Barbara
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from mermaids
I like the image of winter as a ballet and the snowflakes are all ballerinas. Vivid imagery that creates a scene of snowflakes dancing.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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I like the image of winter as a ballet and the snowflakes are all ballerinas. Vivid imagery that creates a scene of snowflakes dancing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much
Comment from Gungalo
Silver stage sparkling
Cold moon shining
Winter smiles
Snowflakes
bow
Wonderful! This nonet is amazing in it comparison to a ballerina. You nailed it girl. So beautiful this write is.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Silver stage sparkling
Cold moon shining
Winter smiles
Snowflakes
bow
Wonderful! This nonet is amazing in it comparison to a ballerina. You nailed it girl. So beautiful this write is.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you, Gungalo
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Smiling at you.
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your personification of winter is splendidly written with terrific imagery painted by your pen.
Your Nonet poem is very well excuted with spot on syllable count.
The art work you used is festive.
I love snow flakes.
In your Nonet poem you used excellent personification.
You used very fine alliteration: "Silver stage sparkling & smiles Snowflakes."
You also used great metaphors.
Your rhyming is good.
I enjoyed your lines:
Snow Queen arrives in gown of sequins
The show is about to commence
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your charming poem to other reviewers.
Keep on writing creative poetry,
Please have a nice day,
Missy.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Poet,
Your personification of winter is splendidly written with terrific imagery painted by your pen.
Your Nonet poem is very well excuted with spot on syllable count.
The art work you used is festive.
I love snow flakes.
In your Nonet poem you used excellent personification.
You used very fine alliteration: "Silver stage sparkling & smiles Snowflakes."
You also used great metaphors.
Your rhyming is good.
I enjoyed your lines:
Snow Queen arrives in gown of sequins
The show is about to commence
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your charming poem to other reviewers.
Keep on writing creative poetry,
Please have a nice day,
Missy.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you Missy
Comment from Joy Graham
This is very imaginative and enjoyable ! I love the picture you used and I love the image of snowy ballerinas dancing about. Best wishes to you in this contest. You have a very valid entry :)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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This is very imaginative and enjoyable ! I love the picture you used and I love the image of snowy ballerinas dancing about. Best wishes to you in this contest. You have a very valid entry :)
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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So glad you liked it, Joy. Thank you Val
Comment from elliejean
I love the poem and the picture. Miss Winter teaches her snowflake to dance. They put on a great show. I like to see thee flakes as they gently float down. Great work.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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I love the poem and the picture. Miss Winter teaches her snowflake to dance. They put on a great show. I like to see thee flakes as they gently float down. Great work.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you so so much
Comment from Jean Lutz
Thank you for using your talent to present a recital from the Creator. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! I wish you well with your entry. Great work by the artist also.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thank you for using your talent to present a recital from the Creator. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! I wish you well with your entry. Great work by the artist also.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for this great review!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done very well bringing to life winter so well with the use of imagery well done I enjoyed my friend good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Yes you have done very well bringing to life winter so well with the use of imagery well done I enjoyed my friend good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Oh, thank you Jill. What a sweet review
Comment from angel123
Your poem is well written and I like the technique of your personification. Your artwork choice is very nice and it goes well with your words.
Angel123
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Your poem is well written and I like the technique of your personification. Your artwork choice is very nice and it goes well with your words.
Angel123
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your generous review
Comment from Allison78
I love the imagery you used in this poem to personify winter, so beautiful and sweet! I could not find any mistakes, well done!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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I love the imagery you used in this poem to personify winter, so beautiful and sweet! I could not find any mistakes, well done!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your generous review