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Christmas traditions

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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hello. Great job with this poem and good choice of words with attached picture. I like the re-wrapping part of memories and sharing those with others. Its a neat concept. Good luck and cheers.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review. We have to pass them on.
Comment from doris1022
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fine septolet. nice form and flow. keep your creativity flowing into the FS so I can read them. nicely penned.
that is a nice picture and colors to go with it.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2012

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Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi, a beautiful vision gave birth to this wonderful Septolet, I love the thought of Then wrap them in memories and re-gift them. Good luck in the contest James xx

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2012

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    THANK YOU FOR THE KIND REVIEW.
Comment from RYME4U
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I like the idea behind your words! This is a well written septolet.The metaphor of being wrapped in memories is great. The picture is a good choice. Good job!

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2012

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Comment from Galactia
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Break out your
cherished Christmas
traditions

then
wrap them
in memories
and regift them

lovely little septolet poem reflecting christmas and the memories of them.

GL in the contest

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2012

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Comment from whizpurr ^-^
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Hi Mystery writer,
This was a wonderful read, so timely, clever, and heart warming. Beautiful presentation... a just right septolet.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Warm regards, W

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2012

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Comment from 4tulips
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I myself am not familiar with style of poetry. But I loved reading your poem and understood the style after it. I think you did a good job at creating a poem that broke into two parts while still telling the story. I really liked the picture you chose to go with your poem. Christmas time is a lot of traditions that do seem to be repeated every Christmas time. Good job.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2012

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Comment from OLA THOMAS
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Good setolet poetry here, like the scheme and the style. Good blenading of the two thought from each part of the work. Good luck.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2012

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