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A collection of treasured poems

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Comment from Rondeno
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Nice poem. However, as I understand it, "Cloud 9" is a place of bliss and delight. You have depicted it as a center of doubt and confusion. Am I wrong?

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    You are right, I was using cloud 9 as some one with thoughts of despair
Comment from doris1022
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He called my name too...I am so glad he cared enough to call me in my desperation. fine write and uplifting. Thanks for sharing today for our edification.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Pleased you enjoyed