Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "A Fist Full of Sand"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
2 total reviews
Comment from Scribbler67
The first thing I said to myself after I'd read this was 'very smooth, very original, very different.'
I definitely like this; three metaphors for love, couched in a well-written, nicely balanced poem.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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The first thing I said to myself after I'd read this was 'very smooth, very original, very different.'
I definitely like this; three metaphors for love, couched in a well-written, nicely balanced poem.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Wow! Thank you so much for your kind words and generous review! I so appreciate your observations... :)
Comment from jadapenn
Loved this one. I have a bucket full of stars so I'm giving you one - at least. lol. You really wrote this well and I enjoyed the visual story. So true are your words. Can't hold on to those things - not even love (says jada the romance writer). Haha. Well done. Loved it. luv jada
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Loved this one. I have a bucket full of stars so I'm giving you one - at least. lol. You really wrote this well and I enjoyed the visual story. So true are your words. Can't hold on to those things - not even love (says jada the romance writer). Haha. Well done. Loved it. luv jada
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Wow! Thank you so much for star #6! I get very few of those. So glad that you could relate. You made my day!! Blessings, judy