Comment from poetbear

Excellent

I like the feeling and the flow.
It is sweet and touching.
It has whimsy yet has a philosophy about respecting Mother Nature.
Reads well and make sense.
It is a dalring piece.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012

Thank you poetbear.

Comment from fairy77

Excellent

This is very good.I'm a big fan of Eric DaGoose.Perhaps he could look at it.He writes with rhyme and silliness.I liked healthy and wise and striped sock.You're off to a dandy start!Don't take this too seriously.beth fairy77.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012

Ha, I won't. But I appreciate your feedback

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I can empathize with that poor turtle. Two has never been so hard to attain. The rhyme was good and the flow and rhythm were great. It was a humorous look at something that was all fiction.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012

Thanks GW, I'm smiling too.

Comment from santapola

Exceptional

Hello there well I am still chuckling over this. Its flows good it's a snazzy little story and its very funny Thank you and it deserves a ?? just for being the best thing I have read today .x

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012

Wow! Thank you for this wonderful review and the six stars. I'm humbled, santapola.