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A collection of treasured poems

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Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This concise poem is very powerful in its theme. Yes, only through our OWN taking of chances can we gain wisdom. When we read the history books, etc., we mostly gain knowledge--not real wisdom. Very good

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
    Thank you Janice
Comment from terry drake
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I know the format of your senryu; but traditionally they are a 5-7-5 verse format. You have a 7-7-8. Not normally accepted in this format. However I personally liked it.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
    Thank you Terry