Aiden
Soon to be big sister7 total reviews
Comment from Sally Carter
What a lovely response to this contest! I usually shy away from these rather odd looking prompts, but you have shown how they are worth having a try at.
Quite charming, and your joy at being a Grandpa again just radiates from that YES! I am just a wee bit envious, in the nicest way. We have no sign of grandchildren on the horizon, but you never know. The day may come eventually.
A pleasure to read and I wish you luck in the contest and with the imminent arrival.
Best wishes
Sally
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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What a lovely response to this contest! I usually shy away from these rather odd looking prompts, but you have shown how they are worth having a try at.
Quite charming, and your joy at being a Grandpa again just radiates from that YES! I am just a wee bit envious, in the nicest way. We have no sign of grandchildren on the horizon, but you never know. The day may come eventually.
A pleasure to read and I wish you luck in the contest and with the imminent arrival.
Best wishes
Sally
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Sally for reading this little poem about my little pumpkin! I am sure one day you will have yours also... Let me say, it's a great feeling!!! Be good, John
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for the contest, but you forgot to rhyme the final two lines as required. However, I see the contest is over, so I'm not going to dock a star. :-)
What an adorable little girl she is!!! I bet she'll be a great big sister. :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for the contest, but you forgot to rhyme the final two lines as required. However, I see the contest is over, so I'm not going to dock a star. :-)
What an adorable little girl she is!!! I bet she'll be a great big sister. :-) Brooke
Comment Written 30-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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Thank you Brooke... Honestly, I missed that rhyming requirement. Better pay closer attention next time. Thanks for reading and sharing and for the generous star rating. John
Comment from angel123
This is a lovely endearing poem about children. I really enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice really goes nicely with your poem.
Angel123
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
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This is a lovely endearing poem about children. I really enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice really goes nicely with your poem.
Angel123
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
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The artwork is Aiden, my granddaughter. Thank you for reading and sharing. John
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi,
Cute picture and a lovely poem about Aiden's becoming a big sister. Syallble count is perfect and you poem is nice to read. Good luck with this contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Hi,
Cute picture and a lovely poem about Aiden's becoming a big sister. Syallble count is perfect and you poem is nice to read. Good luck with this contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thank you mtnspirit .
Comment from RYME4U
This is a well expressed poem. The proudness of "grandparent-hood" shows through. The picture iswell chosen . I assume the little cutie pictured is Aiden.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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This is a well expressed poem. The proudness of "grandparent-hood" shows through. The picture iswell chosen . I assume the little cutie pictured is Aiden.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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That's my little angel... Thank you for reading and sharing.
Comment from MelReyn
Great picture! Is that your Aiden? Congratulations on the new grandbaby! Very exciting and special time for your family. You followed the prompt to a T, great work!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Great picture! Is that your Aiden? Congratulations on the new grandbaby! Very exciting and special time for your family. You followed the prompt to a T, great work!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thank you Melryen for reading and commenting. I appreciate it...
Comment from doris1022
very precious the bow reminds me of Minnie mouse. so sweet. Congrats on the new arrival! I tell my son he has to have lots of babies since I couldn't have but one and wanted more.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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very precious the bow reminds me of Minnie mouse. so sweet. Congrats on the new arrival! I tell my son he has to have lots of babies since I couldn't have but one and wanted more.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thanks Doris for reading and sharing...