Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. It reads like a postcard. It flows and rhymes well and your artwork choice goes well with your words.

Angel123

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thank you so, once again, much Angel123 for your kind review.

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hello. Hey pretty good on this poem. Good use of verbs incorporating the syllable count. Impressive. Even the rhyming scheme was preserved. Great job. Cheers.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thank you Benjamin for your great review.

Comment from mtnspirit

Excellent

Hi,

What a cute poem and it certainly won't be long before they dress up the sky. Right on with your syallable count and a delightful read it is. Thank you for sharing and best wishes with this contest.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thank you so much for your kind review.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is a pleasant, nicely rhymed poem. The description of the the reindeer is well done and the rhythm of the poem is smooth and even. Good job!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thank you so much for your kind review.

Comment from Lovablewitch

Excellent

Six line poems can be very challeging to write. You combined creativity with skill and did an excellent job. Your strong choice of verbs created an active and vibrant feeling in me, as the reader.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks a lot for your kind words.

Comment from el twelve

Excellent

that is nice and to the point and of course the picture is complimentary, the contest required the last two lines to be 9 syllables not 6. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

I changed that, thanks for pointing out my error.:) Thanks also for your kind review.