Who Am I?
Something to confuse the mind...4 total reviews
Comment from October21
Loved this poem, as it is easily relatable in only a short amount of words. We all feel lost sometimes, and it is only when somebody comes into our life and makes us feel loved that we begin to appreciate our priviledges and we find our way. Brilliant idea of incorporating the dream to enhance that idea of not knowing what is real. Great rhetorical question at the end, also:)
Nice job,
Shenel
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Loved this poem, as it is easily relatable in only a short amount of words. We all feel lost sometimes, and it is only when somebody comes into our life and makes us feel loved that we begin to appreciate our priviledges and we find our way. Brilliant idea of incorporating the dream to enhance that idea of not knowing what is real. Great rhetorical question at the end, also:)
Nice job,
Shenel
Comment Written 21-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much... I dont know where I was at the time I writ this :)
Thank you...
Comment from Curly Girly
You chose a lovely picture for this. The Words meet the necessary criteria. But I don't understand what this is trying to say. The middle line has me baffled. CG
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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You chose a lovely picture for this. The Words meet the necessary criteria. But I don't understand what this is trying to say. The middle line has me baffled. CG
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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The second line is after the dream, explaining it to someone(s) and even though they all know, no one will tell you what it means...hope this answers your question...
Comment from mshirachot
Interesting little Haiku. Dreams can leave us wondering who, what, when and where. Those that really amaze me is when you even experience aromas or tastes in the dream. Good job on the syllable count.
Best wishes with your contest entry. Thanks for sharing.
Blessings to you,
Marsha
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Interesting little Haiku. Dreams can leave us wondering who, what, when and where. Those that really amaze me is when you even experience aromas or tastes in the dream. Good job on the syllable count.
Best wishes with your contest entry. Thanks for sharing.
Blessings to you,
Marsha
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Thank you for reading...
If only you knew the dream, what an inspiration that would be...
Comment from Deorre Leonard
Dreams can be so special. When they are good dreams. This is a very unique and creative poem. Thanks for sharing. Well done. Deorre
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Dreams can be so special. When they are good dreams. This is a very unique and creative poem. Thanks for sharing. Well done. Deorre
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Thank you for using the words 'unique' and 'creative' its very up lifting... thanks...
