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Comment from ajdevore
A wonderful love letter to a lost love, wherever he/she might be. The sadness oozes through the words and evokes compassion from the reader Good job.
Anna
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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A wonderful love letter to a lost love, wherever he/she might be. The sadness oozes through the words and evokes compassion from the reader Good job.
Anna
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you ajdevore
Comment from wanderlost
Excellent meter. a nice work, probably lyrics to a song? clearly drawn from the heart. I can feel the longing and regret that you have put in your work. You should have these lyrics published. they are beautiful.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Excellent meter. a nice work, probably lyrics to a song? clearly drawn from the heart. I can feel the longing and regret that you have put in your work. You should have these lyrics published. they are beautiful.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you wanderlost