Comment from Eliza M

Excellent

Dear, sweet Jaq, such a very thoughtful and empathetic piece that has really touched me. Yesterday was black, but today there is a faint glimmer of light as I forge forward through the gloom, and battle with the mood swings, one step at a time. Your poem is uplifting and I hope that others enjoyed it too my friend.Thankyou so very much for being there for me. Your friend, Liz.xx

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012

Aww thank you so much Liz, glad you liked it. I'm here no matter what my friend. Jaq xx

reply by Eliza M on 08-Nov-2012

Thankyou, the feeling is mutual. Will try and gve you a ring in the next few days,'clouds' permitting! It would be really lovely to chat.x

reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012

Just when you are ready, no rush, I'm going nowhere. :) xx

reply by Eliza M on 08-Nov-2012

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Comment from October21

Excellent

This is a lovely message to send to someone- we should keep our chins up and have hope, even after we have been through a storm. Beautiful work:) I loved the subtle rhymes- they were a nice touch!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

Cheers so much October, sometimes you just need to hear that someone is there for you and things will be ok. :) Jaq x

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend there are times like this in our lives when our faith is tested but we have to remain strong and cling to whatever hope we have I know this feeling well ,
well done on this write regards Jill

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

Thanks my friend I know you do and you have coped admirably. Much appreciated review. :) Jaq x

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Something about this poem made me read it over again. I like the message. My favorite part is:

"Away from the eye of
the storm"

There is just a smoothness to this line and a message of faith. I like it very much :) I love your author notes as well to keep my chin up!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

Thanks for your fabulous review as always Joy. :) Jaq x

Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

Hope

From where the darknes wrapped us and suddenly the light appears at the top of your sight in the dark.
The storm has no way to destroy us for as long as we strive with light in the dark. The hope is always shining.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

It is indeed ernesto :) x

reply by ernesto escarro on 07-Nov-2012

thanks for sharing.

Comment from bgcnorth

Excellent

I really enjoyed this poem. It shows where the light is and how to proceed. I love the first two sentences. Indeed that is where I try to keep my eyes fixed. The photo really enhances the meaning.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

Thanks for your kind appraisal :) Jaq x

Comment from Angels27

Excellent

Often times, at the end of a deep long tunnel the only hope we ever have is the small ray of light at the end of it. Where would we be..without hope. Very simple yet profound lines.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

Thanks again Angels for your lovely review. :) Jaq x