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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

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My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from helena63
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im sorry to hear about your loss but you should remember that he is still living within others and im happy that you could find comfort within using this photo cheers helena

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012



    Life is and was so, so, bittersweet...
    Ode to Kimmie. by Ricky1024
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    November 11, 2012 Views: 45
    "Ode to "Kimmie."

    My lovely sweet, sweet "Kimmie"
    You are now in Heaven above,
    my love...
    "Kimmie, my sweet, sweet, Angel
    Child, You will always and forever
    be so loved!
    We worship You for You are "ETERNAL!"
    And ever!
    ...
    You were delivered from Earth and
    there will be no more suffering...
    You have conquered the drugs and
    replace them with forever hugs!
    You learned how to cut hair, so losing
    You now feels so very sad and unfair...
    But God works in mysterious ways that
    we'll never understand.
    All we can do is offer to hold Her
    families hand.
    ...
    So now You must teach and show them
    the Lord so they can understand.
    It will be a long time before they will
    heal from their loss.
    But God is in charge and He's the
    "Heavenly Boss."
    That we will never understand...
    ...
    None of us knows what it's like after
    Death when a dear Soul like "Kimmie"
    utters Her final breath.
    But there must be a very special place
    for the innocent and young like Her
    beloved cousin "Jason" who also was
    fallen and stunned.
    She died from the asthma and He{Jason]
    in a car but the distance between them
    is not very far!
    ...
    So, they now hang out in the presence
    of God just doing their job...
    So They now hang out forever...
    Together in the presence of God.
    ...
    To say that they are the lucky one's
    was not very odd for who believe'th
    in Jesus the Lord will always be there
    to come aboard!
    We Saints will be blessed with Eternal
    Life and Freedom from all sickness and
    from strife.
    ...
    So our Miss "Kimmie' is happy and we'll
    see Her real soon, because life flies by
    like a phase of the Moon.
    ...
    It's Ok to be sad but always remember
    she's safe from the sad...
    Lets have some Faith for She will always
    be now an innocent waif.
    But She now has a new body, maybe even some wings!
    We can only speculate on these "Heavenly Things"...
    ...
    She's up there and She sees and She is so loved.
    That's the best we can give Her.
    Our strength comes from above.
    So goodbye sweet "Kimmie" Jesus loves You so
    very much!
    ...
    You are blessed to be able, with Holy Hands to touch!
    You made it to Paradise at 26 years of age.
    And now there's a new chapter as He turns the page...
    And living with Angels take away all of your fears.
    ...
    We will love you forever and someday we will meet and
    again be a family!
    So sweet is the "Kimmie"we all love.
    We will someday meet and greet!
    But until then, please enjoy the view in Your "New
    Heavenly" seat!
    Miss Arleen Fortune and Mr. Richard Edward Smrkovsky.
Comment from mizzkris20
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This is extremely sad...brought tears to my eyes.

But now I just dream of times
gone by as "The Wisp in the Wind"
and a Heavenly Glow as ride for
as I ride, I die.
Just wondering why I cry?
But for now, I finally fiqured
out why I died.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
    Thanks Mizz, Life for me seems to be the proverbial
    "Bowl of Pits" but with a sunny day and a "Hey!
    I'm sure things will again swing my way.
    Richard Edward Smrkovsky.
Comment from Norbanus
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there seems to be a running theme
To ride and hid, to dream, a scheme
For now just dream of times to come
Then dream of conquest, I'll take some.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Norbanus,
    I ride a "Big" Bike,
    love "Big' women
    that I'm a swimm'in in!
    LOL!
    Thanks,
    Ricky1024.