Silence isn't golden
Silence is golden - is it really?33 total reviews
Comment from Rondeno
How very clever! The metaphorical values of the colors (golden = perfect, blue = sad) are played on with skill. You even use rhyme!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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How very clever! The metaphorical values of the colors (golden = perfect, blue = sad) are played on with skill. You even use rhyme!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Thanks for your encouraging feedback - I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from mchapman
Good 5-7-5- only you need to remove the comas in order for it to have the correct format. Otherwise good interconnecting lines. Thanks for sharing
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Good 5-7-5- only you need to remove the comas in order for it to have the correct format. Otherwise good interconnecting lines. Thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your advice! Angel
Comment from EMB
This is a dark poem that seems to ooze with dismay and hopelessness. It's a great thing in movie theaters, but I don't think you're referring to that kind of silence in this one. Very effective in its straightforward simplicity.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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This is a dark poem that seems to ooze with dismay and hopelessness. It's a great thing in movie theaters, but I don't think you're referring to that kind of silence in this one. Very effective in its straightforward simplicity.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello Angelisat. Very interesting observation you have here regarding silence. I understand that the reduction of noise could actually amplify the amount of lonliness. Very true. Good job with this. Cheers.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Hello Angelisat. Very interesting observation you have here regarding silence. I understand that the reduction of noise could actually amplify the amount of lonliness. Very true. Good job with this. Cheers.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem! Angel
Comment from Deorre Leonard
You are so right silence is not golden... I like the flow of this the picture adds to the presentation. Great choice of words. Nicely done. Deorre
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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You are so right silence is not golden... I like the flow of this the picture adds to the presentation. Great choice of words. Nicely done. Deorre
Comment Written 22-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your review! Angel
Comment from Thatguypk
I really like your poem, but I'm saddened that you see silence as Blue and cold and lonely. There are silent moments, late at night, when the sky is filled with stars, when one can get truly lost in thoughts of the wonders and beauty of the world. Noise is so often a distraction from the things that are really important.
Peace, friend. Enjoy the silence.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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I really like your poem, but I'm saddened that you see silence as Blue and cold and lonely. There are silent moments, late at night, when the sky is filled with stars, when one can get truly lost in thoughts of the wonders and beauty of the world. Noise is so often a distraction from the things that are really important.
Peace, friend. Enjoy the silence.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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I agree that Silence can be a good thing, but I wanted to explore the other side of silence, the dark side, the side not many people think of. Thank you for your review.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
You need to work harder to change the common saying. Lol. Silence is usually golden when applied it wisely. Silence could be dangerous if worngly applied.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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You need to work harder to change the common saying. Lol. Silence is usually golden when applied it wisely. Silence could be dangerous if worngly applied.
ola thomas
Comment Written 22-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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I agree that Silence can be a good thing, but I wanted to explore the other side of silence, the dark side, the side not many people think of. Thank you for your review.
Comment from amada
Silence is great, it leads me to think outside my mind. But sometimes is not so good, when we see injustice and we just stay in silence. Your poem make me think and evaluate myself as well.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Silence is great, it leads me to think outside my mind. But sometimes is not so good, when we see injustice and we just stay in silence. Your poem make me think and evaluate myself as well.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your review! Angel
Comment from Silverlock
When it's dark and one is friendless, I would imagine that silence is indeed blue, or at least it would cause you to feel blue. You've captured a great deal of emotion in just a few words, well done :)
Regards, Barb
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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When it's dark and one is friendless, I would imagine that silence is indeed blue, or at least it would cause you to feel blue. You've captured a great deal of emotion in just a few words, well done :)
Regards, Barb
Comment Written 21-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
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Thanks for the review Barb! It's a great help. Regards, Angel
Comment from McMurry903
I really love this 5-7-5 and the strong thought provoking message you was able to portray. Perfect photo choice as well, this is a strong contest entry and I wish you the best of luck!! Brian :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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I really love this 5-7-5 and the strong thought provoking message you was able to portray. Perfect photo choice as well, this is a strong contest entry and I wish you the best of luck!! Brian :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your kind review! Angel