Comment from AddrieWritesThings

Excellent

I really like the flow of this simple 5-7-5 poem. It says so much in so little words. I have an affinity for this kind of thing. I really love seeing what people can do with little instead of so much. I think it speaks volumes towards their inner personality and character. Great job.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012

Thank you very much, I enjoyed reading your review and I appreciate you going to the effort to rate it.
Mosquito~

Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

Wandering Dreams,,, this has a good flow the structure is good. Great choice of words. thanks for sharing this poem. Well done. Deorre

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012

Thank you very much for your review, it is much appreciated.
Mosquito~

Comment from angelisat

Excellent

You're a great writer Mosquito - I think this is one of your best poems yet. Great job - I love the thought of hazy clouds drifting across my thoughts.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012

Angie, XD you haven't seen any of my other ones.

reply by angelisat on 04-Nov-2012

Hahaha, no-one else here has, but I have. At my house!

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Some dreams. Some dreams will stay with you for a lifetime. This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem. Favorite dreams are dreams of love. Hummmm!! well done

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012

Thank you!

Comment from diannen

Excellent

I gave this a rating of 5 stars, because of the way you described ones thoughts, it is beautiful, and thoughts actually seem to act exactly like this. Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012

Thank you very much! I appreciate it.