Comment from donkeyoatey

Excellent

I believe, that houses, like people have emotions and feelings. And they echo through the years with either the joy or the sadness of the lives that went on within. I'd truly enjoyed your poem, it is the essence of every haunted house story. Thank you for choosing my artwork, I am honored. DonkeyOatey

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012

Hello donkeyoatey, Thank you for your review , i am so pleased that you liked and could feel ' The house on the hill ' and all of its creepy goings on , lol.
And thank you so much for your artwork

Comment from Dodey

Excellent

Love your house on the hill story..creepy and scary lol..
good imagery all through..gate way..gateway..and for more impact in the end line I would say.. ( just a thought )

And please do stay until morning
But never tell what you've seen

The picture is really spooky and fits well the content..
Bravo my friend..Regards..Dee

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012

Hi Dee, would you take another look at ' The house on the Hill '

reply by Dodey on 05-Nov-2012

Had a look and messaged you..You did great..Smiles..Dee

Comment from diannen

Excellent

I have re-read this poem, and realized, I did not quite read it the way it is supposed to as I only read the top layer not below the depth and see what this house is really about, that in reality this old house is but a bit of a dream. Thank you.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012

Hello diannen, would you please have another read of ' The House on the Hill

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Sounds like one of those ghost hunter series. Stay for one night and see what you can see. A great write. I would stay there. Sounds like fun. LOL well done

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012

Hi L,raven, I have added a bit more to ' The house on the hill '. So it is well worth another read