Comment from EMB

Excellent

Well, this was definitely a poem that delves into the fantasy world of knights and dragons and damsels who knights want to woo. :) I enjoyed the poetic narration as you provide for readers a short tale of a knight winning the heart of a fair maiden.

Nice work. :)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012

Hello Edward, I thank you for your review. The world is unfortunately filled with too many dragons and not enough knights

Comment from Gladness

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this bit of fantasy. I think we all love the romance of the princess being rescued by her prince. It starts out in children's fairy tails and never quits.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012

Hello Gladness, thank you for your review and remember fairy tales need never end

Comment from Misrael

Excellent

That was a beautiful poem and very emotional as well. There is something else but I can't put my finger on it.Good read, good job and keep onwriting.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012

Thanks for your review Misrael, I am so pleased that you enjoyed ' You milady ' Maybe the word that you are looking for is ' magical '

Comment from Marquita_The Scribe

Excellent

This is quaint yet charming tale with fortified literary imagery. The words are as pure as a blank canvas. Marvelous work and grammatical posture. Thus a primary model for someone of my stature to emulate.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012

Thank you for your review Marquita, I am so pleased that you enjoyed ' Milady ' yes it is a magical little tale . Picture an enchanting medieval castle enveloped in a trailing ghostly mist as it hauntingly then whispers ' Tread carefully my Love "