Goodbye
Farewell to my dear brother17 total reviews
Comment from wordsareus
I am very sorry to hear about your loss. I think it's wonderful that you are using poetry as an outlet to express your feelings.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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I am very sorry to hear about your loss. I think it's wonderful that you are using poetry as an outlet to express your feelings.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. It has helped a lot xx
Comment from terry drake
Your poem shows respect for the loss of your brother. The cadence was respectful and the rhyme scheme echoed with sorrow on each line. Your loss was shared with this tribute to your brother.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Your poem shows respect for the loss of your brother. The cadence was respectful and the rhyme scheme echoed with sorrow on each line. Your loss was shared with this tribute to your brother.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Yes,he was a great guy, and will very much be missed. Thank you for your kinds words xx
Comment from J. Dark
This is a wonderful poem that conveys your memories and feelings beautifully. You can feel the weight of your loss but your words are a fitting tribute to your brother. I loved the part where you went back to the memories of things you did in times past. It was a very warm moment. This was a special poem and I genuinely hope it brings you back to writing soon.
Kindest of regards,
Mrs D :-)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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This is a wonderful poem that conveys your memories and feelings beautifully. You can feel the weight of your loss but your words are a fitting tribute to your brother. I loved the part where you went back to the memories of things you did in times past. It was a very warm moment. This was a special poem and I genuinely hope it brings you back to writing soon.
Kindest of regards,
Mrs D :-)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, it has really helped as has everyones kind words.xxth
Comment from Meta~Mark
Farewell to my dear brother goodbye..is a heartfelt and emotional one and my brother named Brian was lost as well and call feel the pain and tears when you wrote this as do I thinking of this, BRAVO!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Farewell to my dear brother goodbye..is a heartfelt and emotional one and my brother named Brian was lost as well and call feel the pain and tears when you wrote this as do I thinking of this, BRAVO!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Mark. Everyone's words have helped so much too.
SO sorry that it brought back your pain too, and of course I just realised, he was a wonderful poet xx
Comment from squid152
Very sad story. I am glad you are writing again. Writing will help you process it. It sounds like you had a great relationship with your brother. You can always treasure that.-Gary
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Very sad story. I am glad you are writing again. Writing will help you process it. It sounds like you had a great relationship with your brother. You can always treasure that.-Gary
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Gary. I have just not been able to write anything, until this, so I hope now that I can continue. Yes I will treasure those memories, your are so right xx
Comment from dmt1967
I am so sorry for your loss but writing does help it releases the pain somehow well that's what I find so I am sure it will help thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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I am so sorry for your loss but writing does help it releases the pain somehow well that's what I find so I am sure it will help thank you for sharing
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you, and you are right, it has helped. It took me ages to get started though. I hope to get back to writing again very soon xx
Comment from Maureen's Pen
I am so sorry for your loss. This was a heart full of sorrow and yet I hope release. I lost my mother this year, and felt much as you do...time heals and in the meantime you have penned a work that bridges you to him.
Thank you for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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I am so sorry for your loss. This was a heart full of sorrow and yet I hope release. I lost my mother this year, and felt much as you do...time heals and in the meantime you have penned a work that bridges you to him.
Thank you for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you Maureen, that means a lot. I am so sorry bout your Mother too xx I am sure writing this will help me, and I can get back to writing again xx
Comment from reconciled
sorry I dont have a six....I read this yesterday...but....anyway, i know how you feel....i read the ulagey at my dads funeral......I had been away Texas....too long....he looked so frail....helpless....broke my heart. you know they say the last thing he said was "Michaels here...Michaels here": It haunts me that I wasnt there. love Michael
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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sorry I dont have a six....I read this yesterday...but....anyway, i know how you feel....i read the ulagey at my dads funeral......I had been away Texas....too long....he looked so frail....helpless....broke my heart. you know they say the last thing he said was "Michaels here...Michaels here": It haunts me that I wasnt there. love Michael
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you Michael for your lovely words. Yes break your heart is so right, and I think thats been the same for me, it haunts you, and you cant put it right ? I guess we have to forgive ourselves, not easy. So sorry bout your Dad too xx
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I feel ya...
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bless you xx
Comment from Malerie
This is a beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your brother. Your memories of the times the two of you had will help you get through these times. I believe that it is okay to grieve, cry, laugh, whatever you need to do to get through this. Keep writing, it will give you comfort. Thanks for sharing this emotional tribute.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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This is a beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your brother. Your memories of the times the two of you had will help you get through these times. I believe that it is okay to grieve, cry, laugh, whatever you need to do to get through this. Keep writing, it will give you comfort. Thanks for sharing this emotional tribute.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot, and I will write again soon xx
Comment from Capricorn30
Beautiful tribute--I know Brian is smiling down on you for composing such a wonderful poem;
The fond memories are heart-warming-I can envision the two of you singing to the silly songs as you are driving along;
"Was this a dream?"--this is exactly my feeling when I learned of my mother's passing--we feel like we are walking around in a fog--nothing seems clear-at all;
The memories we treasure, are so valuable, this is all we have of our loved ones;
May they rest in peace
xx
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Beautiful tribute--I know Brian is smiling down on you for composing such a wonderful poem;
The fond memories are heart-warming-I can envision the two of you singing to the silly songs as you are driving along;
"Was this a dream?"--this is exactly my feeling when I learned of my mother's passing--we feel like we are walking around in a fog--nothing seems clear-at all;
The memories we treasure, are so valuable, this is all we have of our loved ones;
May they rest in peace
xx
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you Capricorn, walking in a fog is such a good description of how I felt. Thank you for your encouragement with my writing this xx
