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Viewing comments for Chapter 177 "Senryu (you watch me crying)"
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from elliejean
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Why haven't we figured out a tearless way to cut an onion? I have tried every trick ever told to me. Great work.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much elliejean. It will remain one of life's mysteries I fear :) Jaq x
Comment from RJ
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You did a nice job on your senryu poem and followed the syllable count well. It gave me a laugh remembering how onions do make you cry. Good luck in the contest. RJ

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much RJ. Much appreciated. :) Jaq x
Comment from Bina1
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Wow I hate that job! Best not put any eye make up on before you do it. A fine poem, a great entry for the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
    Thank you Bina always appreciate your reviews. :) Jaq x
Comment from mumsyone
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Perfect artwork for a senryu expressing a situtaion that most reviewers can relate to! Thanks so much for supporting the contest. Good luck in it!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Cheers mumsyone I just wanted to make people smile :) Jaq x
Comment from sunnilicious
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Cutting onions can be a tragedy. Cute artwork. Nicely senryu. Good match together. Also you met the syallable count. Excellent.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thanks Sunni, I just had a bit of fun with this one. :) Jaq x
Comment from Joan E.
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I enjoyed your fun with the surprise punchline! You also selected the perfect illustration for your senryu. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    It was just to lighten things up for myself. I enjoyed it. Glad you did too and thanks for the review.
Comment from Carrie Carson
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Thanks for the laugh, my husband usually can't stand it and offers to chop for me.

No spag, good form, right on the prompt.

Good luck in the contest. :) Carrie

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much Carrie :) x
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes I liked this you bought this artwork to life very well using 17 syllables well done my friend good luck in the contest regards Jill

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much Jill, much appreciated.
Comment from terry drake
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Your three line poem is 5-6-6 which qualifies for seventeen syllables or less. They did not specify in the challenge how many syllables belonged on any one line so you qualify.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
    Thank you, I was a bit worried about that.