Here I Come.
Winter lays in wait.8 total reviews
Comment from Bina1
I'm hoping your aim is off, and you miss my driveway! A fine poem, very visual and an excellent presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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I'm hoping your aim is off, and you miss my driveway! A fine poem, very visual and an excellent presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thanks. I will take a detour.
Comment from racystcy27
This is very clever and very well done. I like the attitude you adopted as the snow..LOL. And thanks so much for using my image as your illustration!
Stacey
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This is very clever and very well done. I like the attitude you adopted as the snow..LOL. And thanks so much for using my image as your illustration!
Stacey
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thank you
Comment from RYME4U
Very nicely done, I like the 'attitude' in this poem. The rhymes are good and the rhythm is smooth and even. You have done a good job here.
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Very nicely done, I like the 'attitude' in this poem. The rhymes are good and the rhythm is smooth and even. You have done a good job here.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thank you
Comment from Tina McKala
This had a nice humorous tinge, I liked that a lot! Mainly the last stanza was one of that kind :)) Good job and good luck in the contest!
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This had a nice humorous tinge, I liked that a lot! Mainly the last stanza was one of that kind :)) Good job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Interesting personification of winter as a hibernating animal. The poem has a touch of humor at the end that makes it fun. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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Interesting personification of winter as a hibernating animal. The poem has a touch of humor at the end that makes it fun. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Pussinoots13
Hi, I really liked your poem it was you as the 3rd person telling us all about what you are going to do to us this winter. It hits the contest mark the way I read it, an enjoyable read well done you mystery author.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Hi, I really liked your poem it was you as the 3rd person telling us all about what you are going to do to us this winter. It hits the contest mark the way I read it, an enjoyable read well done you mystery author.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Bundhoo
Your poem is really amazing and the choice of words are also great.You have created maximum effects with the minimum of words. VERY WELL DESCRIBED!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Your poem is really amazing and the choice of words are also great.You have created maximum effects with the minimum of words. VERY WELL DESCRIBED!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from AlvinTEthington
A very fun poem with a lilting rhyme scheme that makes the poem even more amusing. The turn at the end is unexpected and quite fun. Great work. (I do wonder if it would have been better if you had utilized ballad meter, but that is a personal concern.)
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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A very fun poem with a lilting rhyme scheme that makes the poem even more amusing. The turn at the end is unexpected and quite fun. Great work. (I do wonder if it would have been better if you had utilized ballad meter, but that is a personal concern.)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. It was a fun write.