Thorny Bush
Thorny brush are covered with pricks9 total reviews
Comment from James ANDERSON
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2012
Comment from mahi khan
Great ! Great ! Great !
RHGH SDM,G , JGY jd dkdh ldshd kjdbe ffv slssh kdjgs skshss sdjjf jdjhf kf fje rfkehr dsd fhjd rguuuuuuuuuuudddddddd
Really exceptional!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
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Great ! Great ! Great !
RHGH SDM,G , JGY jd dkdh ldshd kjdbe ffv slssh kdjgs skshss sdjjf jdjhf kf fje rfkehr dsd fhjd rguuuuuuuuuuudddddddd
Really exceptional!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2012
Comment from RIDAAHSAn
Very very bad work.
Poooooooooooooooooooor
Work hard to improve your poem!!!!!!!!You need a lot of hard work pay attention on your studies not other things!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very very bad work.
Poooooooooooooooooooor
Work hard to improve your poem!!!!!!!!You need a lot of hard work pay attention on your studies not other things!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
Comment from Courage 005
Good effort,but it is not in the correct form i think you should divide it into three or two lines and you need improvement and plz add some picture on it,so i am giving you Only 1 star so dont mind it is for your neccessity for poem!and i hope you will write more poems.
Regards
Courage
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Good effort,but it is not in the correct form i think you should divide it into three or two lines and you need improvement and plz add some picture on it,so i am giving you Only 1 star so dont mind it is for your neccessity for poem!and i hope you will write more poems.
Regards
Courage
Comment Written 21-Nov-2012
Comment from mumsyone
You may want to check the syllable count of your poem. I count only 16 syllables, not 17. The 5-7-5 is a very strict form that requires three lines (not one), of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. I'm sure you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.
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You may want to check the syllable count of your poem. I count only 16 syllables, not 17. The 5-7-5 is a very strict form that requires three lines (not one), of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. I'm sure you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
Comment from uniqueauthor
5/7/5 is a very particular application of Japanese Haiku poetry. Formatted thus:
In three lines no more,
and most certainly no less
17 syllables
5 syllables first line
7 syllables second line
5 syllables third line
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17 total syllables
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5/7/5 is a very particular application of Japanese Haiku poetry. Formatted thus:
In three lines no more,
and most certainly no less
17 syllables
5 syllables first line
7 syllables second line
5 syllables third line
_______________________
17 total syllables
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
Comment from Bundhoo
Great ! Great ! Great !
Amazing,Outstanding but but its soo light Ridddddddzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz well goood job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ggggggggggggj hgggggggggtrs gtderejhsdkjahiuasn ggggggggggg hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjbbbbbbhwuagrfuyggggggggggggggggggggggggdhgsssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hdgsdftr
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Great ! Great ! Great !
Amazing,Outstanding but but its soo light Ridddddddzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz well goood job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ggggggggggggj hgggggggggtrs gtderejhsdkjahiuasn ggggggggggg hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjbbbbbbhwuagrfuyggggggggggggggggggggggggdhgsssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hdgsdftr
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
Comment from hubba marwa
Great ! Great ! Great !
Very good Poem !! The choice of words is really nice !!!!
For me you have created maximum of effect with the minimum of words !!!!! Very well described!!!!!!!
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Great ! Great ! Great !
Very good Poem !! The choice of words is really nice !!!!
For me you have created maximum of effect with the minimum of words !!!!! Very well described!!!!!!!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2012
Comment from gazzagodbod
i have only given three stars because i cant actually read it because of the pale colours will happily review again if this is changed gazza
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i have only given three stars because i cant actually read it because of the pale colours will happily review again if this is changed gazza
Comment Written 26-Sep-2012
