Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Giving"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
4 total reviews
Comment from Sueellen11
My friend this is a beautiful poem, lovely rhyming and flow, I enjoyed reading, yes if we embrace His, love and glory, the spirit will come upon us, opening our eyes to capture the glory of GOD's love and heavens glory, well done, blessings, sueellen
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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My friend this is a beautiful poem, lovely rhyming and flow, I enjoyed reading, yes if we embrace His, love and glory, the spirit will come upon us, opening our eyes to capture the glory of GOD's love and heavens glory, well done, blessings, sueellen
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much Sueellen 11 for your beautiful reaction to my poem. Just like most of my poetry writing, it comes to me by the spirit of God and needs very little changes, except for some fine tuning by my husband Andrew who's English does for me. Thanks again for your lovely reaction. Gudbjorg
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming couplets
good use of enjambment to enhance the flow of your lines
You deliver a thoughtful message of faith in a good rhyming poem :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012
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solid rhyming couplets
good use of enjambment to enhance the flow of your lines
You deliver a thoughtful message of faith in a good rhyming poem :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012
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Dear Brooke.
It was so nice hearing from you, and thank your dearly for your wonderful and helpful review especially using such a word as an enjambment impressed me. With love and kindness, Sarah
Comment from asmita 23
very well written!
this is indeed a beautiful poem.
Your ryming is correct,I liked this paragraph very much-So let us give to win a friend
Who will dwell with us till the end.
The Lord is loving, He is so fair,
He showed me how to give and share.
This poem is well displayed.
take care
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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very well written!
this is indeed a beautiful poem.
Your ryming is correct,I liked this paragraph very much-So let us give to win a friend
Who will dwell with us till the end.
The Lord is loving, He is so fair,
He showed me how to give and share.
This poem is well displayed.
take care
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful review. It really touched my heart.
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thanks and
my pleasure
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Thank you so much for giving me such a beautiful review. Sarah
Comment from terry drake
Your poem has a nice cadence and the rhythm of your lines made for an easy read. Your rhyme scheme was well chosen and enhances your theme. Congratulations
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Your poem has a nice cadence and the rhythm of your lines made for an easy read. Your rhyme scheme was well chosen and enhances your theme. Congratulations
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review about my poem. It was really helpful.