All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I'm Possessed"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
42 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Okay, am I really this far behind in my reading? I don't think so! This is stunning, Sharyn, and I haven't seen this one either!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
Okay, am I really this far behind in my reading? I don't think so! This is stunning, Sharyn, and I haven't seen this one either!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
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thx Dawn - it was originally for the naani competition last week I think - I liked it too, glad you did! :) It didn't win :( oh well ...
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I've pretty much given up on those too.
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I just write them for myself as I enjoy the challenge of a prompt - but I no longer vote in the booths, so I have no idea who wins unless I receive a PM which says "Congratulations" - I was surprised last week to receive $90 for the Spirituality one (my Santa Claus/Jesus poem, which I thought most people hated because I got lots of lectures on how naughty I was for that one too) ... win some, lose some, ho hum ...
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Not from me - I loved it! (I must be naughty too!) :)
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oh naughty is good - shake up the God Squad the Dorothy Dix/Aunt Abby crew a bit! :)
Comment from Mai Mai
Very inspirational. I love the economy of words and the powerful image relayed as a result. This is very good work. Also, I too, enjoy a good sunset. Good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
Very inspirational. I love the economy of words and the powerful image relayed as a result. This is very good work. Also, I too, enjoy a good sunset. Good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx mai mai!
Comment from hari anand
Dear visionary1234 I loved this nani poetry prompt entry of your like all other poetries you post , very colourful just like you, loved it.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
Dear visionary1234 I loved this nani poetry prompt entry of your like all other poetries you post , very colourful just like you, loved it.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thank you my dear - this was an easy one to write, as that pic had been on my desktop for a few weeks, just waiting for the words to come along ... :) Sharyn
Comment from Kingsland
Sometimes nature presents the best artistry of all. You found an excellent picture for your short poetic presentation. I enjoyed reading this excellent thoughts process... John
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
Sometimes nature presents the best artistry of all. You found an excellent picture for your short poetic presentation. I enjoyed reading this excellent thoughts process... John
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thanks John!
Comment from Angels27
A lovely picture and a very beautiful Naani poem. The energy in the lines just ooze out. Finger painting the sky is so different. It made very good reading. Enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
A lovely picture and a very beautiful Naani poem. The energy in the lines just ooze out. Finger painting the sky is so different. It made very good reading. Enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx Angels!
Comment from Dklrdmcches
This was very nicely written. You were able to convey the message of joy and of reaching for your dreams. Great imagery was felt as your well crafted words spoke with a tone full of joy. Great job...dark lord
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
This was very nicely written. You were able to convey the message of joy and of reaching for your dreams. Great imagery was felt as your well crafted words spoke with a tone full of joy. Great job...dark lord
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Thanks Dklrd! :)
Comment from justatuna
I wondered why I didn't see this in my messages. Another great job. You have such a unique style. Every time I read your work I feel better. It's like your personality comes through. Great job my friend.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
I wondered why I didn't see this in my messages. Another great job. You have such a unique style. Every time I read your work I feel better. It's like your personality comes through. Great job my friend.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx so much Tuna! :) Sharyn
Comment from misscookie
The artwork goes well with your poem.And I love how your words flow.
You capture my attentiopn all the way
I thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
The artwork goes well with your poem.And I love how your words flow.
You capture my attentiopn all the way
I thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx misscookie!
Comment from Gungalo
Oh the thrill of it all. Finger painting the sky is fun and will make you feel as if you are possessed. Just don't ever let it go!!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
Oh the thrill of it all. Finger painting the sky is fun and will make you feel as if you are possessed. Just don't ever let it go!!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx Gungalo!
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y pleasure.
Comment from sunnilicious
Lovely artwork. Wonderful Naani Poem. Whimsical and loving. Well thought out. Nicely written with descriptive phrases creating good imagery. Excellent.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
Lovely artwork. Wonderful Naani Poem. Whimsical and loving. Well thought out. Nicely written with descriptive phrases creating good imagery. Excellent.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx sunni ... :)