Comment from Eliza M

Excellent

You've achieved the 5 7 5 syllable count Jaq with eth/ear/re/al as 4. I really like this and you have made effective word choices to describe your guardian angel. Good consonance of 'l' sounds. I believe in angels and my special one has been with me on many occasions I am sure.
Lovely piece.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012

Thank you Liz I too believe deep down that there is something/one looking after us. :) Jaq x

Comment from terry drake

Excellent

5-7-5 syllable count verse format challenge successfully accomplished with your three line poem. Congratulations on the poem and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

It's not for a contest Terry I'm just trying out styles and trying to hone some skills. Thanks for your kind appraisal. :) Jaq xx

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend I make the first line 4 syllables it may be my pronunciation just check to be on the safe side you can always add a word like my it is a beautiful poem I hope I find my guardian angel regards Jill

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thank you Jill I will look at that again. I'm sure you will xx Jaq :)