Golden Expressions
Free Verse Poem17 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
This feels to me like a ponderance on inspiration and the joyful and hateful ways it can strike, whether a raw and untamed explosion or a gentle trickle like wine into risotto, forming the perfect texture. You gave me thoughts, and that is always good.
Mike
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This feels to me like a ponderance on inspiration and the joyful and hateful ways it can strike, whether a raw and untamed explosion or a gentle trickle like wine into risotto, forming the perfect texture. You gave me thoughts, and that is always good.
Mike
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you for stopping by and the encouraging insightful review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well, writer friend, for myself I love free verse, I love that I can let my emotions flow. I do like the way you start this with a question. Nice one Joann.
Cheers
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Well, writer friend, for myself I love free verse, I love that I can let my emotions flow. I do like the way you start this with a question. Nice one Joann.
Cheers
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you for stopping by and the encouraging words, I'm sorting through old works.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Wow, this is a thinking person's poem. Lots of unanswered questions. It felt a little like a interrogation, or demand for answers.
It flowed nicely, the runny nose of a toddler with a cold.
Nicely done. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Wow, this is a thinking person's poem. Lots of unanswered questions. It felt a little like a interrogation, or demand for answers.
It flowed nicely, the runny nose of a toddler with a cold.
Nicely done. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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I appreciate you taking the time to read an old poem of mine, Blessings
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have read those golden expressions and doubt how the author and writer expressed those words so effective and touching and you experienced a metallic effect of each word but you have an objection about those expression which are not free and clear like you or your words of expression, importance of use of words is highlighted; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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You have read those golden expressions and doubt how the author and writer expressed those words so effective and touching and you experienced a metallic effect of each word but you have an objection about those expression which are not free and clear like you or your words of expression, importance of use of words is highlighted; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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I wrote this for another writer that was on the site, he kept talking about his gold teeth, needless to say, he did not enjoy the tribute.
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Golden Expressions, has some fun with the idea of those rich strings of words which are linked together by some people to for thought we can invest some time in. Nice.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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This free verse, Golden Expressions, has some fun with the idea of those rich strings of words which are linked together by some people to for thought we can invest some time in. Nice.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this positive review.
Comment from lancellot
Nicely done. Where does the talent to write come from? Is it natural, are you just born with it. I doubt it since we have to learn to read and write first. But. Maybe the imagination and need to create is natural. Thoughtful piece.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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Nicely done. Where does the talent to write come from? Is it natural, are you just born with it. I doubt it since we have to learn to read and write first. But. Maybe the imagination and need to create is natural. Thoughtful piece.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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I do not know, I do not have that talent, I wing it mostly lol thanks for the review
Comment from SteveY
A very unique little poem that you've got here my friend. I never thought of writing of bicuspids! But you managed to "pull" it off:) Way to go!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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A very unique little poem that you've got here my friend. I never thought of writing of bicuspids! But you managed to "pull" it off:) Way to go!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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There was a writer on the site, who always talked about his gold teeth, so I guess it stuck with me, needless to say, he wasnt impressed when he read it,
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
This was really a brilliant piece of writing- very clever, to the point and quite witty. Great gasp of vocabulary and the means to maneuver and manipulate the meanings. Great work! Holly
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
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This was really a brilliant piece of writing- very clever, to the point and quite witty. Great gasp of vocabulary and the means to maneuver and manipulate the meanings. Great work! Holly
Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
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Thank you Holly, it was inspired by being on this site. It is one of my favorites, You may like Void, it is somewhere in my profile.
Comment from Spitfire
I hate to think that losing our teeth has an impact on our taste for words. It certainly keep us from chewing them up real fine.
Do words taste richer,
Or leave a trace of metallic behind.
Can you enunciate free?
I'll take the fifth on this. LOL
Clever indeed.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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I hate to think that losing our teeth has an impact on our taste for words. It certainly keep us from chewing them up real fine.
Do words taste richer,
Or leave a trace of metallic behind.
Can you enunciate free?
I'll take the fifth on this. LOL
Clever indeed.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you, It's weird but I enjoyed writing it.
Comment from Carole Rosa
Joan, Unusual poem but unique and interesting. I don't know how poets think of such great ideas to write about. Nice. Carole
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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Joan, Unusual poem but unique and interesting. I don't know how poets think of such great ideas to write about. Nice. Carole
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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I know it is unusual, so unusual I'm not sure what it is either ,lol, Thanks so much for reviewing.
