Gotta Sleep Early
been thinking what to write and just wrote what i did..5 total reviews
Comment from Luscious Mia 69
Your syllable count is spot on with a lovely pic of a child sleeping. I wish you well in the competition. a delightful topic to write on.
Mia
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Your syllable count is spot on with a lovely pic of a child sleeping. I wish you well in the competition. a delightful topic to write on.
Mia
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I'm back here tonight (after 3 long years). Thank you for having made the review. Better late than never, I owe you this THANKS. :)
Comment from Amsterdam
Ok now awake
you been asleep long enough
Things to do, grab boots
Hello are you there
I think im talking to air
are you still asleep
Do I have to shake
Dang, still not up from your nap
I guess thats a wrap
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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Ok now awake
you been asleep long enough
Things to do, grab boots
Hello are you there
I think im talking to air
are you still asleep
Do I have to shake
Dang, still not up from your nap
I guess thats a wrap
Comment Written 03-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
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I've gotten up and am here...lol. Thanks for sharing your cute cute poems here.
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;). Was just checking..... Lolz...Am
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
Really a very cunning approach introducing yourself to this wonderful world of fantasy.
This's like a floating breeze before the storm.And I'll be looking for that tornado from you.
What I've liked the most is your imagery and language simple but commanding.
Anyway nice to meet you because we both belong to the same land moreover beginning at the same time but u are 3yrs elder to me.
Good luck buddy!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Really a very cunning approach introducing yourself to this wonderful world of fantasy.
This's like a floating breeze before the storm.And I'll be looking for that tornado from you.
What I've liked the most is your imagery and language simple but commanding.
Anyway nice to meet you because we both belong to the same land moreover beginning at the same time but u are 3yrs elder to me.
Good luck buddy!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Nice to see you too, especially of your kind. But I still have a lot to learn more before I hit like a tornado. Hope to see you often!
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Hello Jaadhu Lova! I'm back here tonight (after 3 long years). How have you been doing?
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Hi,Great to hear you:)
now i'm working n as soon as i get my salary i vl upgrade n start writing:)
Comment from Tina McKala
Very nice poem! I really have a problem to fall asleep before 4am for last couple of days, so I can relate to this :) That baby on picture is so lovely! :) Good job! Tina
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Very nice poem! I really have a problem to fall asleep before 4am for last couple of days, so I can relate to this :) That baby on picture is so lovely! :) Good job! Tina
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Thanks a lot Tina!!
Comment from Crystal Carey
I really should learn to sleep early as well! I love the artwork you chose, it goes really well with your words! All in all the poem came together nicely! I don't see how you could improve this at all, so good job!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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I really should learn to sleep early as well! I love the artwork you chose, it goes really well with your words! All in all the poem came together nicely! I don't see how you could improve this at all, so good job!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much..
