Dodgy Desiderata
A hoodlum's rules for life72 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
A very clever poem in this format, I liked it very much ,even the tempo change from the l to the m but you recovered well great job. Regards jumbo j.
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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A very clever poem in this format, I liked it very much ,even the tempo change from the l to the m but you recovered well great job. Regards jumbo j.
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thank you, Jumbo.
Comment from tinlight
Love it! LOL! 'Quintessential qualities ...' is the best line. Who knew the letter Q could yield such alliteration! There are also some great rhymes in here: invitation/accumulation; quickness/sickness. Best of luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Love it! LOL! 'Quintessential qualities ...' is the best line. Who knew the letter Q could yield such alliteration! There are also some great rhymes in here: invitation/accumulation; quickness/sickness. Best of luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Thanks - gld you enjoyed - the question of quirkiness is quite quip-worthy
