A Book of ... Free Verse (Vol.1)
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Syphilography"Metre ... Freeverse
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Comment from kahpot
Correcting when put correctly can be very helpful, in the world of impure sexual intercourse being told you have syphilis could be very helpful if understood that you need to change or improve your ways, I found this to be an excellent and very interesting read, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Correcting when put correctly can be very helpful, in the world of impure sexual intercourse being told you have syphilis could be very helpful if understood that you need to change or improve your ways, I found this to be an excellent and very interesting read, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Yes just make sure your fully qualified or else send them to a doctor ...
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Great write-up. A very good offering for the contest. I kind of like the name you gave it -Syphilography. The poem was really engaging, and to some extent had a great sense of humor. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Great write-up. A very good offering for the contest. I kind of like the name you gave it -Syphilography. The poem was really engaging, and to some extent had a great sense of humor. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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It was meant to and also serve with a warning the duality of it all that leads us onto the dark nature of mankind.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
I like the presentation... it's very pretty. Your poem is good but a little confusing. Did someone upset you? Is this poem for he or her?
Gypsy
I don't understand
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
I like the presentation... it's very pretty. Your poem is good but a little confusing. Did someone upset you? Is this poem for he or her?
Gypsy
I don't understand
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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I've lost count of the number of people that upset me hey ho what you know gotta go !!!
Comment from J. Dark
This is fabulous and very cleverly done. So glad that you pointed me in the direction of this one!
Kindest of regards,
Mrs D :-)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
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This is fabulous and very cleverly done. So glad that you pointed me in the direction of this one!
Kindest of regards,
Mrs D :-)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
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Anytime Mrs. D... feel free to poke around and if you feel like it give a review... have fun.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I agree, insults have no place here on fanstory and that we have a responsibility to put forth our best work. Their is nothing more frustrating than reading a piece full of obvious errors, ones that should be caught with one proofread.Well written poem!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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I agree, insults have no place here on fanstory and that we have a responsibility to put forth our best work. Their is nothing more frustrating than reading a piece full of obvious errors, ones that should be caught with one proofread.Well written poem!!! Debbie
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Many thanks...
Comment from Changeisgood
Bicpen, I got from the poem that it become too easy to critize and thought of some critics who became very arrogant. Not on this site. They carved out reputations for over-killing other people's work, not conscious of the (or not caring) about the feelings of the author. It's an all too easy attitude and needs pruning. The poem doesn't need pruning, the attitude it describes. Very good. Changeisgood
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Bicpen, I got from the poem that it become too easy to critize and thought of some critics who became very arrogant. Not on this site. They carved out reputations for over-killing other people's work, not conscious of the (or not caring) about the feelings of the author. It's an all too easy attitude and needs pruning. The poem doesn't need pruning, the attitude it describes. Very good. Changeisgood
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Excellent many thanks, much appreciated.
Comment from hari anand
Correction is an infection, very novel, Syphilis writing an is ease, yes it is indeed, permeating ambition, loved it, extraordinary for me.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Correction is an infection, very novel, Syphilis writing an is ease, yes it is indeed, permeating ambition, loved it, extraordinary for me.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Excellent much appreciated.
Comment from justatuna
Don't know exactly what to make of this. I really don't know if I like it or not. Having read it several times, I have to give it 5. Your work is always intense and thought provoking. Perhaps, not always what people want to hear. Maybe that's your point. Great job.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Don't know exactly what to make of this. I really don't know if I like it or not. Having read it several times, I have to give it 5. Your work is always intense and thought provoking. Perhaps, not always what people want to hear. Maybe that's your point. Great job.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Excellent, many thanks.
Comment from NightWriter
"Syphilography" offers an interesting twist to the world of writing. Beautifully written free verse poem. It reads smooth throughout. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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"Syphilography" offers an interesting twist to the world of writing. Beautifully written free verse poem. It reads smooth throughout. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Excellent, many thanks.
Comment from God's Writer
An excellent poem my friend. So full of descriptive word pictures that drew me along with the reading. Like marshmallow puffy clouds with the backdrop of the perfectly blue sky. I found this poem to be top notch and awesome. Thank you for the privilege of reading it.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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An excellent poem my friend. So full of descriptive word pictures that drew me along with the reading. Like marshmallow puffy clouds with the backdrop of the perfectly blue sky. I found this poem to be top notch and awesome. Thank you for the privilege of reading it.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Thanks HP.
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You are welcome.
