Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

Well... one thing i must say is not all are religious and such charms are used in many cultures and always will be ... the church i dare say isn't always for everyone and what the hell
it such things being solace ...why not
thanks for sharing always a pleasure

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you Tammy.

Comment from Tina McKala

Good

Nice free verse, I know that free verse do not really have to flow smoothly, but some lines in your poem disturbed me a little bit more, so I am sorry I cannot give you 5. But you put your message across quite well, I just didn`t find the form totally excellent. I hope you know what I mean. Tina

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you for your advice Tina.

Comment from hari anand

Excellent

I agree , I totally agree with you,as I am not superstitious , but if nothing works for you or thing doesn't go your way you tend to fall into this fortune tellers trap.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you babills.

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

I totally agree: there is no such thing as luck. Thanks for sharing your view of it.

Into a world (of) old fables and folktales that aren't true.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you Mumsy.

Comment from Anthony Crosbie

Excellent

This is a nicely written poem. It flowed well and it carried an important message. Some people get obsessed with superstition and forget to live their life to the full.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you Archie.

Comment from Linda England Bonam

Excellent

Very nicely done and well thought out! I like the message!
You are so right that people take this garbage seriously, when they should be believing what's right!!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you Linda.

Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid

Excellent

Aloha from Hawaii, I like the message and feel the same as you. There are a lot of superstitions and folk lore in Hawaii. I only believe in God's beauty that is everywhere I look. Aloha Hawaiian Mermaid

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you Mermaid.

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

So please just relax your heart mind and soul.

Get those wicked superstitions out of your psyche.

And give yourself to Jesus and let Him be in control.

For He is the Lord, strong and Mighty.


Superstitions are passed down from generation to generation, and are just part of peoples' lives,
but I'm sure very few take them seriously.

a good poem, ending with strong advice.

Margaret

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you Margaret.

Comment from Dustybones

Exceptional

What goes around comes around. Somehow that is a hope filled saying also, I love my Jesus and I need prayers at times. The reason I don't care for that saying is that God Forgives and so many people think IF someone sins then they will GET their just return. LOL I just want a greatness in return. CYA dude.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thank you very much dusty.

Comment from Doc Holiday

Excellent

Oh the chains we have that bind us are only the result of fear and the keys we have to free us are within our soul so dear! (just made that up...)

Superstitions are really Stupidstitions.
So believe in yourself and in your God and live your live as He and you want to. Nice Job!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012

Thanks Doc.