Fall
wonders of fall7 total reviews
Comment from RangerEric
I found this write to be calm and soothing. I would have darkend the letters to make it easier to read. Nice photo to set the tone. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2012
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I found this write to be calm and soothing. I would have darkend the letters to make it easier to read. Nice photo to set the tone. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2012
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Thanks for Review!
Comment from kaleidoscopedreams
Well,fall is just around the corner here, and it certainly does have it's special beauty. I also love the crispness-- and the chill in the air makes me feel like cozying up by the fire with a good book. Your words were very well selected and enjoyable. Thank you.
Warmly,
Kailey
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2012
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Well,fall is just around the corner here, and it certainly does have it's special beauty. I also love the crispness-- and the chill in the air makes me feel like cozying up by the fire with a good book. Your words were very well selected and enjoyable. Thank you.
Warmly,
Kailey
Comment Written 24-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2012
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Thanks for the review!
Comment from ernesto escarro
Fall
The wonder of this write is, the color of the sky
is the same color with the leaves at autumn.
What for is fall for the colorful stories.
The activities bringing merriment to life goers.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2012
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Fall
The wonder of this write is, the color of the sky
is the same color with the leaves at autumn.
What for is fall for the colorful stories.
The activities bringing merriment to life goers.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2012
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Thanks so much for the review!
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Thanks for sharing.
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 count if you extend brilliant to three syllables
excellent consonance of L sounds in all three lines
vivid descriptive detail with strong sensory appeal to more senses than just the visual
and you create an effective upbeat mood :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Your poem is in good 5/7/5 count if you extend brilliant to three syllables
excellent consonance of L sounds in all three lines
vivid descriptive detail with strong sensory appeal to more senses than just the visual
and you create an effective upbeat mood :-) Brooke
Comment Written 24-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the review1
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Thank you for the review!
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Thank you for the review!
Comment from Adri7enne
Good subject. I like the colors you've chosen - fall colors. However, the 5-7-5 Poem should have 17 syllables, or beat. 1st line, 5 beats, second line, 7 beats, third line, 5 beats. I don't think this poem meets the criteria. There's no way to make "Brilliant colors" into 5 syllables.
Good try, though. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Good subject. I like the colors you've chosen - fall colors. However, the 5-7-5 Poem should have 17 syllables, or beat. 1st line, 5 beats, second line, 7 beats, third line, 5 beats. I don't think this poem meets the criteria. There's no way to make "Brilliant colors" into 5 syllables.
Good try, though. Keep writing.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from barkingdog
Your 5/7/5 description of fall is very nice. You not only tell of the colors but the feel of the weather as well.
Your use of 'll' consonance in 'brilliant, illuminated and chilled' bring a nice flow to the piece.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Your 5/7/5 description of fall is very nice. You not only tell of the colors but the feel of the weather as well.
Your use of 'll' consonance in 'brilliant, illuminated and chilled' bring a nice flow to the piece.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thanks so much for the review
Comment from Gungalo
What a beautiful 5/7/5/ write Victor. It is as if you wrote a haiku for us instead. Wonderfully said and done. I like this one a lot.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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What a beautiful 5/7/5/ write Victor. It is as if you wrote a haiku for us instead. Wonderfully said and done. I like this one a lot.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thanks so much for the review!
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Smile.