The Grim Reapers' Dilemma
A picture inspired story42 total reviews
Comment from Al-Masud
It is beautiful and well written. The writer captured the dilemma of the three reapers and masterfully reinvented their trade through the suggestion of their philosopher- Thanatos. The piece can become a novel if the thread continues after the reapers had retrained.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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It is beautiful and well written. The writer captured the dilemma of the three reapers and masterfully reinvented their trade through the suggestion of their philosopher- Thanatos. The piece can become a novel if the thread continues after the reapers had retrained.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments and the suggestion to continue this. It is worth considerating.
Beth
Comment from elchupakabra
This story is deliciously macabre and extremely entertaining. I have a particular interest in Greek mythology and was very intrigued by the choice in names for the Reapers. I also enjoyed the political undertone whether it was intended or not. Superb work.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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This story is deliciously macabre and extremely entertaining. I have a particular interest in Greek mythology and was very intrigued by the choice in names for the Reapers. I also enjoyed the political undertone whether it was intended or not. Superb work.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for reading amd commenting on one so far back in my portfolio. I especially appreciate the six star review. Yes I chose those names for a reason, and I'm glad noticed the political undertones. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this.
Beth
Comment from EMB
This was rather ingenious. Specialized reapers? So they should've majored in Murder, War, and Suicide the way practical people major in business, nursing, or computer technology. LOL
That's classic.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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This was rather ingenious. Specialized reapers? So they should've majored in Murder, War, and Suicide the way practical people major in business, nursing, or computer technology. LOL
That's classic.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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Thank you, Edward. I appreciate you reading and commenting on this. I'm glad you got a chuckle. It was meant to be funny in a dry way.
Beth
Comment from MumEsGirl
Marvellous and amusing work. Love the subtle satire running through it. I enjoyed the idea of the grim reapers specialising.
Sad to know that for some the grim reaper will be around the corner sooner than they realise
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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Marvellous and amusing work. Love the subtle satire running through it. I enjoyed the idea of the grim reapers specialising.
Sad to know that for some the grim reaper will be around the corner sooner than they realise
hugs
kate
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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Thank you Kate, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this story.
Beth
Comment from Robin1976
Very nice. The story goes perfectly with the picture. The tongue in cheek approach is well done. It also reminds us of the fact that even though we've cheated death in some ways, there are still plenty of unpleasant ways to go.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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Very nice. The story goes perfectly with the picture. The tongue in cheek approach is well done. It also reminds us of the fact that even though we've cheated death in some ways, there are still plenty of unpleasant ways to go.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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Thank you Robin, I appreciate you reading and commenting on this story.
Beth
Comment from jgirlie152
This is such an interesting and well written story that I have no recourse but to say you surely get a 6-star for not only having this brilliant idea for a story, but to write it in a fashion which is rather on the humorous side, as well as the horror of it all. Congratulations on a job sell done.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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This is such an interesting and well written story that I have no recourse but to say you surely get a 6-star for not only having this brilliant idea for a story, but to write it in a fashion which is rather on the humorous side, as well as the horror of it all. Congratulations on a job sell done.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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Wow! Thank for parting with one of your six stars for a story that isn't even paying any more. I really appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Vladilynn
You'd my vote!! I hope you win for the contest. Youve nailed a good one and the sarcasm lines makes me smile. Loved the title as well based to the inspiring picture, you've a good and creative mind.
Thank you for sharing.
Love much,
Lynn:0)
Good luck!!!!!!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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You'd my vote!! I hope you win for the contest. Youve nailed a good one and the sarcasm lines makes me smile. Loved the title as well based to the inspiring picture, you've a good and creative mind.
Thank you for sharing.
Love much,
Lynn:0)
Good luck!!!!!!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much Lynn. I really appreciate you reading and commenting on this. I'm so glad you liked it.
Beth
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You're welcome Beth! Hope you win!!
Comment from RikkaLyn
I really enjoyed reading this, it was extremely creative and had a great story line. I loved the sarcasm of what society could become. The ending was great; I was very pleased that death wasn't cut out altogether but that other forms of death had become more "popular".
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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I really enjoyed reading this, it was extremely creative and had a great story line. I loved the sarcasm of what society could become. The ending was great; I was very pleased that death wasn't cut out altogether but that other forms of death had become more "popular".
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for the six star rating and for the affirmative comments. I'm so glad you like this and I wish there had been points and cash still available. I really appreciate what you had to say.
Beth
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is superbly conceived and well written. I've just been reading the nominees and have decided to cast my vote for this one. You deserve to win... hoping that you do! :)
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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This is superbly conceived and well written. I've just been reading the nominees and have decided to cast my vote for this one. You deserve to win... hoping that you do! :)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much Phyllis. I'm so glad you liked this little story and I really appreciate the vote.
Beth
Comment from LAFraser
You've penned a fascinating little story here, and it works great with the picture. The points your reapers voice make sense, in their line of work. Thank you for posting and I wish you a wonderful week. :)
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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You've penned a fascinating little story here, and it works great with the picture. The points your reapers voice make sense, in their line of work. Thank you for posting and I wish you a wonderful week. :)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this. I do appreciate the good wishes. Have a nice week yourself.
Beth
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You're welcome, Beth. :) ~Lisa