Comment from
bowls
Excellent! This looks really promising. A very exciting start to the next volume. I'd certainly be tempted to read on if I were picking this up and scanning the first chapter. You raise many questions, establish the main characters and their relationship and have the plot zooming off at breakneck speed right from the start. Count me in!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
Thank you sooo much, you are very kind and encouraging. After my week away, I hope to finish the posts for my novel, and start on the sequel.
Comment from
donaldww
This is a great start to your new book or story, 'Return to Eden.' The name reminds me of Joni MItchell's song: Woodstock, time to get back to the garden.
Cheers!
DW
Comment Written 17-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
Thank you for your great comment and powerful thought!
Comment from
CheyLGwriter
This has my attention already. What a way to spend the day as a newlywed. The person who kidnapped them was certainly driving crazy. Good thing he didn't bring any attention to himself. I can't wait to see who this menacing big guy is. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
Thank you for your kind words. The Return to Eden is my sequel, so posts will be spasmodic. My first novel is complete, but not all posted, and I am revising it currently.