Aftermath of a Dream
6 total reviews
Comment from Scarbrems
I enjoyed this piece. Wondering if there's a play here on "drag" kings and queens. Different approach to the prompt. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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I enjoyed this piece. Wondering if there's a play here on "drag" kings and queens. Different approach to the prompt. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 17-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Was a bit of fun. Thanks for reading.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very funny story. What a waste that a drop-dead gorgeous gal has such yearnings to be a male he-man. It sounds like she possesses all the right moves. Like the nosepicking and the farting and the longing to get to Happy Hour. This is an excellent entry for the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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This is a very funny story. What a waste that a drop-dead gorgeous gal has such yearnings to be a male he-man. It sounds like she possesses all the right moves. Like the nosepicking and the farting and the longing to get to Happy Hour. This is an excellent entry for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Well it was some fun time I allocated for my silly side. Thanks so much for your review and stopping in for a visit.
Comment from Earl of Oxford
As you'd just had such a manly swash-buckling dream, I will forgive your fart. :-)
This is very unique off-the-wall humour, and whether the anonymous writer is male OR female, he/she has a great imagination.
Thanks for the fun.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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As you'd just had such a manly swash-buckling dream, I will forgive your fart. :-)
This is very unique off-the-wall humour, and whether the anonymous writer is male OR female, he/she has a great imagination.
Thanks for the fun.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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It was a lot of fun writing, playing with the words withour regard to contest out-come. Glad youcould share a snicker or two with me. Thnaks.
Comment from Onixxiya
Tightly written, every word certainly counts and you kept me entertained throughout. Well written, well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Tightly written, every word certainly counts and you kept me entertained throughout. Well written, well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thanks and five hundred words on the button.
Comment from donaldww
The narrator awoke an realized she was still a woman, albeit a dander-nosed farting and shaving fraulein.
Gloria Steinam [spelling: Steinem]
In the end, I couldn't tell if this was a drag queen going to the Drake Hotel for a drink, or tinker bell caught in a man's body.
Bizzare!
DW
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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The narrator awoke an realized she was still a woman, albeit a dander-nosed farting and shaving fraulein.
Gloria Steinam [spelling: Steinem]
In the end, I couldn't tell if this was a drag queen going to the Drake Hotel for a drink, or tinker bell caught in a man's body.
Bizzare!
DW
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Yes, it was a bizzare night filled with mishapen images and things that hide under the bed.
Comment from Kingsland
I think you wrote this well to the context of what the prompt was calling for. It's never any fun being fired. So that makes it a drag right there. I enjoyed partaking of this well written short story... John
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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I think you wrote this well to the context of what the prompt was calling for. It's never any fun being fired. So that makes it a drag right there. I enjoyed partaking of this well written short story... John
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thanks for the visit so very early on this side of the planet.
