Spiritual Oasis
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Baptized Anew"a collection of spiritual poems
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Comment from MizKat
yeltel - Your poem is beautiful. Inspirational or Spiritual poetry is my favorite kind to read and write. I enjoyed this from beginning to end. Kat
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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yeltel - Your poem is beautiful. Inspirational or Spiritual poetry is my favorite kind to read and write. I enjoyed this from beginning to end. Kat
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your review, MizKat, and your compliment of my poem. Blessings, Y.
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Though spiritualism isn't my fave genre, Yelena, as I often find the sentiments so samey, I reckon this is one of your best ever sonnets.
Your meter is perfect - though I had to read 'metawotsit' in last line a few times, and your rhymes fit in so well, apparently unforced.
No point in giving you a sixer as this post is unpromoted, and my top-rating won't therefore give it possible extra exposure on front page's 'today's well-received poems' list - just the way the site works, though I feel it is worthy of top rating.
Good to see you posting.
Best wishes, Ray
ADDED; DARNIT, YELENA, I WAS AWARDED 37 CENTS, SO i OBVIOUSLY WAS TOO QUICK TO REVIEW BEFORE YOU CERTIFICATED IT. I RTIED TO UPGRADE BUT WASN'T ALLOWED TO, SO I HOPE MY 'VIRTUAL' IS ACCEPTABLE.
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Though spiritualism isn't my fave genre, Yelena, as I often find the sentiments so samey, I reckon this is one of your best ever sonnets.
Your meter is perfect - though I had to read 'metawotsit' in last line a few times, and your rhymes fit in so well, apparently unforced.
No point in giving you a sixer as this post is unpromoted, and my top-rating won't therefore give it possible extra exposure on front page's 'today's well-received poems' list - just the way the site works, though I feel it is worthy of top rating.
Good to see you posting.
Best wishes, Ray
ADDED; DARNIT, YELENA, I WAS AWARDED 37 CENTS, SO i OBVIOUSLY WAS TOO QUICK TO REVIEW BEFORE YOU CERTIFICATED IT. I RTIED TO UPGRADE BUT WASN'T ALLOWED TO, SO I HOPE MY 'VIRTUAL' IS ACCEPTABLE.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you, dearest Earl, for your most gracious review. I promoted it a few minutes I released it, aleit you read it unpromoted. I am grateful for the virtual six, and thank you again for "your best ever" [sonnet]. I write spiritual poetry every now and then - after all, we have so much to be grateful for through His grace. All of the wonders of the world is God's creation, and I am happy to be the word painter.
Lots of love, Yelena
P.S. I'd love to see your spiritual poem one day.
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Sorry for the typos - I meant "albeit", and a few minutes "after" I released it
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Thanks for your gracious and fun review, Yelena. I did add a footnote to my review, but guess you replied before it registered.
xx
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Blast - I missed those. Maybe I should now downrate. Haha. xx
