Comment from
Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done very well in this poem very strong descriptions in this imaginative poem that reads very well good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2012
Thank you once again for your kind words. Jaq x
Comment from
THEHISTORYMAKER
Excellent. Really enjoyed this one. Sounds so real. What you cannot see, always makes you frightened.
Walking tall towards the door then backing down, due to fear.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2012
Thank you for that appraisal. I can't count the number of times fear of the unknown holds you back. :) Jaq xx