Morning Fair
Finding life9 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
I love the way you have used some of the required words in unexpected and creative ways :-)
I am always looking for entries in this contest that stand out because they don't go for the obvious - congratulations :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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I love the way you have used some of the required words in unexpected and creative ways :-)
I am always looking for entries in this contest that stand out because they don't go for the obvious - congratulations :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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Hi there! Thank you so much!! I sure appreciate a kind note and hope you have a great Monday. Don't work too hard. :)) Hugs to you...Susan
Comment from TammyGail
What a story this was.. short yet intriguing and well expressed in so few words- your imagery was a perfect fit
and loved your notes as well.. best of luck and thanks for sharing..
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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What a story this was.. short yet intriguing and well expressed in so few words- your imagery was a perfect fit
and loved your notes as well.. best of luck and thanks for sharing..
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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Hi there! Thank you so much!! I sure appreciate a kind note and hope you have a great Monday. Don't work too hard. :)) Hugs to you...Susan
Comment from iloveharpandviolin
Beautiful. almost like poetry. Very refreshing, especially compaired to all the other ones about drunk blood-thirsty brides and grooms...ugh. Would like to read more ofyour work.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Beautiful. almost like poetry. Very refreshing, especially compaired to all the other ones about drunk blood-thirsty brides and grooms...ugh. Would like to read more ofyour work.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Hi there! I too like harps, violins, and especially dulcimers. I hope to learn to play a dulcimer before I get too decrepit. I'm very grateful for this kind note, and just delighted you liked this. It's my way of saying, 'I must have hope'? I will contact you after the contest if you like.
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That's intersting, I also am interested in the dulcimer! what a coincidence! Do you play harp or violin?
Comment from Spiritual Echo
This is almost perfect.Change the second 'morning' to soft pastel.
Great entry.
It works and is non-repetative.
The site is annoying me. I have nothing else to add, but here is my punishment for being terse.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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This is almost perfect.Change the second 'morning' to soft pastel.
Great entry.
It works and is non-repetative.
The site is annoying me. I have nothing else to add, but here is my punishment for being terse.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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I agree...and fixed the too many 'mornings'...I was completely blind to that. Another example where passion over rode the rules of writing. Thank you Ingrid. You are yet another ray of sunshine that helps keep me going. I appreciate. x.
Comment from gazzagodbod
fascinating stuff my friend love the picture and your little story thank you my friend and good luck in the contest xxgazzagodbodxx
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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fascinating stuff my friend love the picture and your little story thank you my friend and good luck in the contest xxgazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Hi Gazz! How are you? I'm so glad you liked this. just my way of trying to see the light at the end of the proverbial tunnel ... :)
Comment from Gargantuan2
Yeah, I've heard the tale. Doing it while still getting in the words required is nice too. Good luck in the voting, I hope you do well, you deserve it :)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Yeah, I've heard the tale. Doing it while still getting in the words required is nice too. Good luck in the voting, I hope you do well, you deserve it :)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Hi there ... Thank you so much. I'm happy you have heard this legend too. Neat. I'm just trying to see the bright spots that keep flitting away like elusive little butterflies. Thanks again!
Comment from Scarbrems
A different approach to the contest, here. Poetic prose with great imagery, but some mistakes:
"Afterall (after all), there are no mortals on this earth(,) who can steal away(,) this, the morning of my days." - remove bracketed commas.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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A different approach to the contest, here. Poetic prose with great imagery, but some mistakes:
"Afterall (after all), there are no mortals on this earth(,) who can steal away(,) this, the morning of my days." - remove bracketed commas.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Hi Emsey! Fixed the nits, I was half asleep. Thank you very much and so glad you enjoyed this?
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, but i know who this sounds like, great imagery presented in your story and the picture looks so lonely. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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this is very well written, mystery writer, but i know who this sounds like, great imagery presented in your story and the picture looks so lonely. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Hi there! Thank you so much. I must try to fight for what little I have left. And see a light at the end of this long dark tunnel. Thanks again Sweet!!
Comment from visionary1234
A grandly lyrical entry, borderingon poetry! Bang on word count and combination according to the prompt - good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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A grandly lyrical entry, borderingon poetry! Bang on word count and combination according to the prompt - good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Hi! Thank you very much. I call these 'postcard' stories...or vignettes, I guess. I appreciate your kind thoughts ... :)