To a son of God
Viewing comments for Prologue "Blessed Blood"Metre ... Freeverse & Quatrain
16 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this it reads very well through the verses it is a strong poem with meaning that is beautifully presented well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Yes I liked this it reads very well through the verses it is a strong poem with meaning that is beautifully presented well done regards Jill
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Excellent,
many thanks,
much obliged,
Bic.
Comment from Heaven Bound
The 2nd poem of your tonight. What a special treat. Again, very well done. I understand the significance of the blood (and several others on FS will as well). But, I am going to be interested to see how the general FS population receives this. Thanks.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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The 2nd poem of your tonight. What a special treat. Again, very well done. I understand the significance of the blood (and several others on FS will as well). But, I am going to be interested to see how the general FS population receives this. Thanks.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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I also like to see how they are recieved ans so long as they are addressed as poetry I dont really mind.
Comment from terry drake
Your spiritual offering was well written and would mean a lot to those who believe in God's redemption of man and the sacrifice of his own son on the cross. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Your spiritual offering was well written and would mean a lot to those who believe in God's redemption of man and the sacrifice of his own son on the cross. Nicely done!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thanks TD.
Comment from fictionwriter
You capture so well all the many ways of looking at what the Savior did for all us pitiful, carnal men and women. A beautiful poem. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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You capture so well all the many ways of looking at what the Savior did for all us pitiful, carnal men and women. A beautiful poem. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Many thanks.
Comment from Mai Mai
This was a very interesting read. A tribute like this I have not seen in quite some time. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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This was a very interesting read. A tribute like this I have not seen in quite some time. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Mnay thanks.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your sincere spiritual poem vividly conveys that the sweetest liberty is that provided by Jesus. Your poem is like a Psalm.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Your sincere spiritual poem vividly conveys that the sweetest liberty is that provided by Jesus. Your poem is like a Psalm.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Many thanks.
Comment from TammyGail
Bicpen always enjoy your writing
this was such a lovely verse
indeed well written and expressed
beautiful imagery used alongside your verse
thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Bicpen always enjoy your writing
this was such a lovely verse
indeed well written and expressed
beautiful imagery used alongside your verse
thanks for sharing
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Tammy always a pleasure just wish I could review more thas all...maybe one day.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a nicely written poem I like the bit about us all fighting for liberty and freedom it was very nicely put thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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This is a nicely written poem I like the bit about us all fighting for liberty and freedom it was very nicely put thank you for sharing
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Many thanks...
Comment from artemis53
To be washed in the blood is a very empowering and yet humble feeling. It gives one a new life and a new purpose. We see totally differently.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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To be washed in the blood is a very empowering and yet humble feeling. It gives one a new life and a new purpose. We see totally differently.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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That we do A. The Fathers hand is now seen in and ove all things concerning us.
Comment from THE FREAK
Aw wow, well done once again. You really are a spiritual guy, claiming the word of the lord and for that I applaud you sir. The poem was very nice, very clean and direct to the point of saviour-ism. We all make sacrifices from one point to another, but Jesus lead the way to self-improvement. "I help those who help themselves." Such divine words.
Once again, well done. Great job.
THE FREAK
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Aw wow, well done once again. You really are a spiritual guy, claiming the word of the lord and for that I applaud you sir. The poem was very nice, very clean and direct to the point of saviour-ism. We all make sacrifices from one point to another, but Jesus lead the way to self-improvement. "I help those who help themselves." Such divine words.
Once again, well done. Great job.
THE FREAK
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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THE FREAK, I bow to your kind words and pray you may see the beauty of helping those that are not able to help themselves, with the right love and attention they can become a remarkable testimony to the grace of God.
I know what you mean, care is not always an easy thing for someone who does not wish or desire it, this is where prayer and faith come to a will of their own. Heavenly gifts for a heavenly cause.
