The Eden Tree
Viewing comments for Chapter 91 "References "A family's need of a miracle is in a Box
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Comment from mandieleigh81
Loving the details and starting to get more in tune with the story, o ya I went back and got caught up since our last chat we had.
The details are pretty in depth to the scenario also.
In the paragraph: By far their most ..... is the symbol ( &) needed?
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Loving the details and starting to get more in tune with the story, o ya I went back and got caught up since our last chat we had.
The details are pretty in depth to the scenario also.
In the paragraph: By far their most ..... is the symbol ( &) needed?
Comment Written 01-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you for continuing to read my novel and offer advice and encouragement,
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is progressing along very nicely, and this time I don't have a single suggestion. As always, your plot is well-thought-out, your characters like old friends, your voice consistent. I think I'd like to see more excitement, but that's my personal taste, and no reflection on the writing ability. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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This is progressing along very nicely, and this time I don't have a single suggestion. As always, your plot is well-thought-out, your characters like old friends, your voice consistent. I think I'd like to see more excitement, but that's my personal taste, and no reflection on the writing ability. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I wont be able to post or review till the week-end now as we are child-minding our three-year old grandson. Cya when I get back!
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Enjoy!
Comment from bowls
A very joyful end to the wedding festivities and a nice tying up f loose ends, including a description of the exodus. This chapter gives off a very good and positive feeling that all's right with the world. Just one missing apostrophe: in paragraph three : Goliath's feet.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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A very joyful end to the wedding festivities and a nice tying up f loose ends, including a description of the exodus. This chapter gives off a very good and positive feeling that all's right with the world. Just one missing apostrophe: in paragraph three : Goliath's feet.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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Thanks for your great encouragement and precise assistance.
Comment from Sandie lee
This was an interesting chapter. I haven't read the rest so I have to go on this one alone.
I found it a bit draggy where you were explaining the different places each person was heading to, however it was well written.
I think you deserve a five for the writing.
Well done :P
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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This was an interesting chapter. I haven't read the rest so I have to go on this one alone.
I found it a bit draggy where you were explaining the different places each person was heading to, however it was well written.
I think you deserve a five for the writing.
Well done :P
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Thanks for your kind review. I hope to make the chapter better at my final edit.
Comment from TammyGail
This was some read vigournet
ever compelling and well written
your closing lines I found to be
so very emotional..can't wait for the next
thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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This was some read vigournet
ever compelling and well written
your closing lines I found to be
so very emotional..can't wait for the next
thanks for sharing
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Thanks again for your kind words.