Who are they?
A mesmerising look at a dysfunctional family25 total reviews
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
This is a beautiful piece of work- much dignity and self respect came from the experience. I came from a dysfunctional family myself, so i could relate on many levels. Perfect rhyming verse that gave clear definitions of the things that occurred in each couplet. Beautiful job! Holly
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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This is a beautiful piece of work- much dignity and self respect came from the experience. I came from a dysfunctional family myself, so i could relate on many levels. Perfect rhyming verse that gave clear definitions of the things that occurred in each couplet. Beautiful job! Holly
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing..I appreciate this so much! Happi
Comment from Stalking Wolf
This one touched very close to home, I too could never please, and the abuse was endless, If, I let it it would continue on today, but I also broke the cycle, and did not treat my son that way, I only have just the one. To sad to say enjoyed but you can bet I understand.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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This one touched very close to home, I too could never please, and the abuse was endless, If, I let it it would continue on today, but I also broke the cycle, and did not treat my son that way, I only have just the one. To sad to say enjoyed but you can bet I understand.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Stalking Wolf, Its not everyday that someone really understands what you have been through..You do my friend, and I appreciate your honesty and your wonderful review..I am also glad to hear that you too have broken that chain..Happi
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I am glad you have broken it, to pass it on is a shame, innocent children will pay the price. You earned the review. Have a great day. Stalking Wolf.
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Thank you Stalking Wolf you are a great friend! Nor importantly you and your wife are family to me! Happi
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Family is family, no matter where, when or how. Welcome, my kin. Stalking Wolf.
Comment from Meta~Mark
you must be on a roll today..after all your cooking, cleaning and dusting galore :) day of birth a great joy..now they are older..yikes, awesome poem!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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you must be on a roll today..after all your cooking, cleaning and dusting galore :) day of birth a great joy..now they are older..yikes, awesome poem!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Hahaha! Thank you so much! lol Happi
Comment from uniqueauthor
I never experienced the aloneness of not being loved, but I do understand about being the oldest, since I want the oldest of ten. Like I said I was not unloved, but I did feel my folks were so cruel, until one day I had kids of my own. Then I understood. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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I never experienced the aloneness of not being loved, but I do understand about being the oldest, since I want the oldest of ten. Like I said I was not unloved, but I did feel my folks were so cruel, until one day I had kids of my own. Then I understood. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the review.. I in no way resent my parents making me clean or do chores. It made me a more responsible person and that is what you feel I am sure. I only wish they had not been so abusive mentally. Thank you for the review. Happi
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I understand what you are saying. You're welcome. peace for today
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
a very sad but true account of many families, alas.
fortunately it came good for you, and i'm glad, but
many carry on the trend themselves, more's the pity.
a very well penned and presented piece, Happi,
that flowed with relative ease. thank you for
sharing. warmly, x, eph.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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a very sad but true account of many families, alas.
fortunately it came good for you, and i'm glad, but
many carry on the trend themselves, more's the pity.
a very well penned and presented piece, Happi,
that flowed with relative ease. thank you for
sharing. warmly, x, eph.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the great review and understanding this problem I had. Blessings! Happi
Comment from artemis53
I understand completely. You can relive the childhood that you wished you had with your children. My Mother was very strict in all issues. One day as she was visiting me she said :You're a wonderful Mother." I will always remember that.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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I understand completely. You can relive the childhood that you wished you had with your children. My Mother was very strict in all issues. One day as she was visiting me she said :You're a wonderful Mother." I will always remember that.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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How wonderful for you to hear that from your Mom. My Mom knows I'm a good Mom but would never say that because of her pride. That is horrible. I'm glad your did. Thank you for the review. Happi
Comment from Janice Canerdy
So often messed up family situations are the subjects of funny sitcoms, but in real life--not funny, right?!
Good job
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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So often messed up family situations are the subjects of funny sitcoms, but in real life--not funny, right?!
Good job
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Your right it's not fun or funny but in order to move forward we do need to laugh! Thank u! Happi
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Your right it's not fun or funny but in order to move forward we do need to laugh! Thank u! Happi
Comment from strandloper
This is so true! The saying goes that one cannot choose one's family but you can choose your friends. So there you are, you get a second chance! As for the poem, you have managed to convey the message in a very poetic way. Loved the alliteration:"cooking,cleaning". This poem can be a lesson for parents in: "How not to". Absolutely love the username! Good write, you have done well!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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This is so true! The saying goes that one cannot choose one's family but you can choose your friends. So there you are, you get a second chance! As for the poem, you have managed to convey the message in a very poetic way. Loved the alliteration:"cooking,cleaning". This poem can be a lesson for parents in: "How not to". Absolutely love the username! Good write, you have done well!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much! I appreciate such a wonderful review and I hope you have a great week! Happi
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Thank you so much! I appreciate such a wonderful review and I hope you have a great week! Happi
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Who are they?' is an extremely well-written and heart-wrenching piece. To be brought up in a loveless must bring true misery. It was a privilege to review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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'Who are they?' is an extremely well-written and heart-wrenching piece. To be brought up in a loveless must bring true misery. It was a privilege to review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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I'm the one that is honored to have you and all of the fantastic poets here review my work. I appreciate it so much. Thank you! Happi
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I'm the one that is honored to have you and all of the fantastic poets here review my work. I appreciate it so much. Thank you! Happi
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Happi, you're more than welcome.
With my best wishes, the Duchess
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You're very welcome Happi.
Kindest wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Titanx9
I understand what you are saying. Dysfunctional families can be barnacles on the soul, because memories of things that happened to you tend to play repeatedly. It's best to turn them a loose and pray for them from afar. Love them and forgive them, but to keep your sanity, stay away. I swore I would not perpetuate the madness, and I don't think I have. Peace to you!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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I understand what you are saying. Dysfunctional families can be barnacles on the soul, because memories of things that happened to you tend to play repeatedly. It's best to turn them a loose and pray for them from afar. Love them and forgive them, but to keep your sanity, stay away. I swore I would not perpetuate the madness, and I don't think I have. Peace to you!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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And also with you! (peace) you are right on track with what I'm dealing with. Thank you for the fabulous review. Happi
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And also with you! (peace) you are right on track with what I'm dealing with. Thank you for the fabulous review. Happi
