The Eden Tree
Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "Maps , Charts, Drawings and Notes"A family's need of a miracle is in a Box
4 total reviews
Comment from bowls
What a bombshell! You're certainly stirring things up in the plot department right now. Very nice and unexpected twist to the story. An excellent chapter.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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What a bombshell! You're certainly stirring things up in the plot department right now. Very nice and unexpected twist to the story. An excellent chapter.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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Thanks. You are so kind.
Comment from mshirachot
You caught me off guard with your spelling of "Manoeuvering" and then I remembered that it made sense for you to use the "Olde English" form since you are in the UK. LOL.
It's great to read some of the other "British" idioms like "swimmingly". This chapter captures a lot of that heritage.
Blessings and shalom!
Marsha
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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You caught me off guard with your spelling of "Manoeuvering" and then I remembered that it made sense for you to use the "Olde English" form since you are in the UK. LOL.
It's great to read some of the other "British" idioms like "swimmingly". This chapter captures a lot of that heritage.
Blessings and shalom!
Marsha
Comment Written 28-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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Thanks for your review, which made me smile, in a warm way. I suppose I do use some phrases that are archaic over the pond.
Comment from Overthehill
Another excellent chapter. I liked the way the descritions enabled me to visualise your characters to their best advantage. I also liked the humour in the very last line. All in all, a good read.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012
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Another excellent chapter. I liked the way the descritions enabled me to visualise your characters to their best advantage. I also liked the humour in the very last line. All in all, a good read.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for your very kind and encouraging words.
Comment from Dawn Munro
I'll bet your hero was relieved the tension had eased with the mammoth guy! (lol) (sorry, couldn't resist - been a bit of a rough couple of days and I need the humor) Anyway, on to the review - I truly feel like just saying blah, blah, blah, because honestly, I do not see a thing I could improve upon - you don't need anything from me (except, perhaps to buy the book!)Great read, as usual. Excellent, realistic characters, lots going on, wonderful, descriptive phrasing, and so on, and so on...a pleasure to read your work. Please keep 'em coming!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012
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I'll bet your hero was relieved the tension had eased with the mammoth guy! (lol) (sorry, couldn't resist - been a bit of a rough couple of days and I need the humor) Anyway, on to the review - I truly feel like just saying blah, blah, blah, because honestly, I do not see a thing I could improve upon - you don't need anything from me (except, perhaps to buy the book!)Great read, as usual. Excellent, realistic characters, lots going on, wonderful, descriptive phrasing, and so on, and so on...a pleasure to read your work. Please keep 'em coming!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012
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Thank you soooooo much for your kind words. Sorry you have had a rough couple of days, I hope that "Goliath" has brought some cheer!
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You bet! Thanks so much.