Divine Carpet
5-7-5 haiku3 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
that is a pretty meadow. nice photograph. vivid imagery created. you told a story too. also you meet the syllable count requirement. excellent.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2012
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that is a pretty meadow. nice photograph. vivid imagery created. you told a story too. also you meet the syllable count requirement. excellent.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my haiku.
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Thank you for taking the time to review my haiku.
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Comment from Kiwi Storywriter
This is a great haiku. Very well written. Beautiful picture to go with the vivid imagery of the poem. I like the idea of the wildflowers been "spread speckled". Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2012
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This is a great haiku. Very well written. Beautiful picture to go with the vivid imagery of the poem. I like the idea of the wildflowers been "spread speckled". Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my haiku.
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Thank you for taking the time to review my haiku.
Comment from gifted$1
Great artwork pick to go with this poem. I like the words you chose to fit in perfectly with the syllable count. These are not easy to write and you said so much in such a short amount of space. Good images..I can feel that cool grass blanket on my feet. Nice job.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2012
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Great artwork pick to go with this poem. I like the words you chose to fit in perfectly with the syllable count. These are not easy to write and you said so much in such a short amount of space. Good images..I can feel that cool grass blanket on my feet. Nice job.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my haiku.
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Thank you for taking the time to review my haiku.