haiku (insect trills resound)
sounds of twilight13 total reviews
Comment from Bobbi22
Cricket rhapsody seems like it would be such a pleasant sound - but after a while, quiet is welcome. Very well written 5-7-5 haiku poem.
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Cricket rhapsody seems like it would be such a pleasant sound - but after a while, quiet is welcome. Very well written 5-7-5 haiku poem.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2012
Comment from ennahanid
What a vibrant picture you chose to head line your Haiku.
Great color and font choice as well for your lovely words.
I am happy that I got to read this one today - Dinah
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What a vibrant picture you chose to head line your Haiku.
Great color and font choice as well for your lovely words.
I am happy that I got to read this one today - Dinah
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
Comment from sunnilicious
That's a pretty haiku. vivid imagery created. you told a story too. also you meet the syllable count requirement. Excellent work.
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That's a pretty haiku. vivid imagery created. you told a story too. also you meet the syllable count requirement. Excellent work.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
Comment from starkat
lovely job with connected imagery and assonance ( sound,out and psody) as you tickle the auditory senses while providing a comfortable place to listen in the twilight meadeow - crickets create a pleasing concert as the reader stands in the meadow at twilight engulfed by the surround-sound of crickets
enjoyed how you handled this haiku bringing the reader along to enjoy this outdoors scenario
excellent contest entry - should be a strong contender
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lovely job with connected imagery and assonance ( sound,out and psody) as you tickle the auditory senses while providing a comfortable place to listen in the twilight meadeow - crickets create a pleasing concert as the reader stands in the meadow at twilight engulfed by the surround-sound of crickets
enjoyed how you handled this haiku bringing the reader along to enjoy this outdoors scenario
excellent contest entry - should be a strong contender
... ;)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
Comment from rama devi
Outstanding haiku and yes, it sounds like crickets;n nice assonance and the consonance of insect and cricket works well; fine consonance of w too. Finely composed and finely presented with lovely artwork, this make a strong entry for the contest.
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Outstanding haiku and yes, it sounds like crickets;n nice assonance and the consonance of insect and cricket works well; fine consonance of w too. Finely composed and finely presented with lovely artwork, this make a strong entry for the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this haiku about the sounds of nature. i enjoyed readiing it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this haiku about the sounds of nature. i enjoyed readiing it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2012
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This haiku captures the impression of a single moment with vivid sensory imagery. It meets the criteria of the contest rules while at the same time being a real haiku. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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This haiku captures the impression of a single moment with vivid sensory imagery. It meets the criteria of the contest rules while at the same time being a real haiku. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 26-Jul-2012
Comment from jraff100
This piece is very well thought and written. First one hears the the music in a beautiful setting,and creating humour by naming the symphony. Yes i could be a fan of cricket rhapsody.
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This piece is very well thought and written. First one hears the the music in a beautiful setting,and creating humour by naming the symphony. Yes i could be a fan of cricket rhapsody.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2012
Comment from harmony13
Great Haiku! The first two lines connected well. The last line was excellent and put it all together. Thank you for
a poem well written..........harmony13
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Great Haiku! The first two lines connected well. The last line was excellent and put it all together. Thank you for
a poem well written..........harmony13
Comment Written 26-Jul-2012
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done very well using this short form this is very descriptive and beautifully presented I enjoyed well done good luck regards Jill
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Yes you have done very well using this short form this is very descriptive and beautifully presented I enjoyed well done good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 26-Jul-2012