Comment from bowls

Excellent

Nice to see that James' reputation continues to rise. I really like what you've done with his character. He could have been just a stereotypical nerdy son, but you've had him bloom into a well rounded human being before our eyes. I see you're still building our anticipation for the wedding. Nice going!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2012

Thanks for your comment. I appreciate your opinions and weigh your advice.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

Excellent work vigournet
I enjoyed reading this chapter
it was well written and expressed
you kept my eye throughout
great closing with the girls
thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2012

Thanks very much for your ever-kind and encouraging words.

Comment from tango494

Excellent

This submission was very short for a chapter, I have not read your previous ones. It was hard to gauge any real plot but your words flowed well. Also I did not notice any grammar issues.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2012

Thanks for your comment. It is short, so sorry for that. My final revision is merging some chapters.