The Heir Apparent
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
My sweet friend. I have to go back and catch up on a couple of chapters but how you end this is impressive in it's simplicity. I love it. So well written every word in this story. I applaud not only your talent but your heart. xoxo huggs deborah
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2012
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My sweet friend. I have to go back and catch up on a couple of chapters but how you end this is impressive in it's simplicity. I love it. So well written every word in this story. I applaud not only your talent but your heart. xoxo huggs deborah
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2012
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Goodness, you caught me off guard with this review. Yes, I felt simplicity was best after so much chaos. Glad you approved.
Comment from psalmist
I waited until the end to give you a 6 for this very enjoyable story. I wanted to make sure I had one to give you. A sweet and uncomplicated ending that left me with a feeling of peace and that everyone was going to be OK. I hope you will be posting other stories? Linda
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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I waited until the end to give you a 6 for this very enjoyable story. I wanted to make sure I had one to give you. A sweet and uncomplicated ending that left me with a feeling of peace and that everyone was going to be OK. I hope you will be posting other stories? Linda
Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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I am so pleased you enjoyed this book. And thank you for the awesome and much appreciated 6 stars. Yes, I will be writing more. Maybe not a book right away but short stories for sure.
Comment from Alaskastory
'The Heir Apparent' ends in a marvelous way. You were so clever to not create family or funeral scenes. The meeting with Mac that shows a true friendship is a perfect way to sum up the loose ends of the story. Terrific mystery, Sasha!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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'The Heir Apparent' ends in a marvelous way. You were so clever to not create family or funeral scenes. The meeting with Mac that shows a true friendship is a perfect way to sum up the loose ends of the story. Terrific mystery, Sasha!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Thank you, I am so pleased you liked the ending. I wanted it to be simple but informative. Thank you for the 6 stars, I sincerely appreciate them.
Comment from Joan E.
I liked the detail and immediacy of the "flap" of Mac's hair. He is such a decent guy--I was glad to read more about his character. I liked his explaining the connection with the title and the story ending on a note of camaraderie. Thank you again for sharing your engaging work. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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I liked the detail and immediacy of the "flap" of Mac's hair. He is such a decent guy--I was glad to read more about his character. I liked his explaining the connection with the title and the story ending on a note of camaraderie. Thank you again for sharing your engaging work. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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Thank you. I was hoping that Mac and James's relationship stood out and that I clarified the title in an appealing way.
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Both missions accomplished! Hugs- Joan
Comment from Halfree
The six is for the entirety. A well crafted story with some twists and turns. Good character development through the story. I suspect you will go through some rewrites and changes before it comes out as a book. Think this story with its twisting plot is very readable. Glad you shared with us. P.S. appreciate your reviews and comments on some of my offerings. Helped a lot
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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The six is for the entirety. A well crafted story with some twists and turns. Good character development through the story. I suspect you will go through some rewrites and changes before it comes out as a book. Think this story with its twisting plot is very readable. Glad you shared with us. P.S. appreciate your reviews and comments on some of my offerings. Helped a lot
Comment Written 22-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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I plan to do quite a bit of editing but the main plot is just as I wanted it to be. Thanks so much for following this despite the long process. Thanks for the awesome 6 stars too. I sincerely appreciate it.
Comment from Showboat
You go, girl! Another wonderful book finished.
I'm so proud of you, Sasha. I know you've had some issues over the past few months that have been a real hindrance, but still, here we are! KUDOS!
Hugs,
Gayle
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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You go, girl! Another wonderful book finished.
I'm so proud of you, Sasha. I know you've had some issues over the past few months that have been a real hindrance, but still, here we are! KUDOS!
Hugs,
Gayle
Comment Written 22-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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Thanks so much. I am so glad I finally finished this one. I also appreciate the awesome 6 stars!
Comment from rtobaygo
KUDOS ON A WELL WRITTEN WORK. ENDING WAS SATISFACTORY, WITH NOTHING COMING IN AT THE ELEVENTH HOUR TO CHANGE THE STORY;S INTENT NOR MESSAGE. CAN'T WAIT TO BEGIN READING YOUR NEW WORK. REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO IT.
TAKE CARE,
RAY
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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KUDOS ON A WELL WRITTEN WORK. ENDING WAS SATISFACTORY, WITH NOTHING COMING IN AT THE ELEVENTH HOUR TO CHANGE THE STORY;S INTENT NOR MESSAGE. CAN'T WAIT TO BEGIN READING YOUR NEW WORK. REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO IT.
TAKE CARE,
RAY
Comment Written 22-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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Thanks so very much. I am so pleased you liked this story.
Comment from RebelRose
I hate to see it come to an end. This was a great book and I am so glad I got to read it. I know you put your heart and soul into it with all the research you did. Very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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I hate to see it come to an end. This was a great book and I am so glad I got to read it. I know you put your heart and soul into it with all the research you did. Very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much. Knowing you enjoyed it is all a writer can ask for. But to be honest, I am thrilled it is finally done.
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Smurphy
I'm still far behind with my reviewing.
Will try to drop in on my laptop from time to time and give a real review.
Ron
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Hi Smurphy
I'm still far behind with my reviewing.
Will try to drop in on my laptop from time to time and give a real review.
Ron
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Take your time, it will still be here when you get back.
Comment from Cranial Thinker
This was a most wonderful vividly told story and it saddens me that this is the end of this write,I still say that this could very easily become a movie or a TV series/dramatic
motion picture and I strongly believe it would be a well accepted event....Just really over the top talent my friend....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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This was a most wonderful vividly told story and it saddens me that this is the end of this write,I still say that this could very easily become a movie or a TV series/dramatic
motion picture and I strongly believe it would be a well accepted event....Just really over the top talent my friend....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Thank you so very much. I am thrilled over how well this book has been received.
