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A family's need of a miracle is in a Box

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Comment from TammyGail
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vigournet I got behind a bit but was indeed happy to pick up today.. This made for another great read.. well written and expressed.. great closing lines as well.. love that you always capture my att..

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2012


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
    Thanks for your kind words...I admit there is a bit of a lull, but the wedding is really something!
Comment from bowls
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A charming little scene by the sea. Life for the family seems totally blissful now. Is all the trouble over or are you planning to bring in some complications? I don't know that the metric conversion after "3 miles" is necessary since this is a novel and not a text book. Three should be written as a word rather than a digit. You've made this place sound so appealing I must put it on my list of places to see.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2012


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
    There are some real complications to come. I guess on FS because the posts are quite short, the story-line can appear slow, but I hope it will not be in the final novel. Woolacombe in North Devon is truly a wonderful place, and we love The Royal Hotel. The only prob sometimes is the British weather.