Fourth of July
An Acrostic poem38 total reviews
Comment from Dougspoetry
This is really great! I love the picture, your rhymes are smooth, and the flow is beautiful. Great tribute to the USA! Thanks for sharing.
God Bless!
Doug
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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This is really great! I love the picture, your rhymes are smooth, and the flow is beautiful. Great tribute to the USA! Thanks for sharing.
God Bless!
Doug
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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God bless you, Doug! Thank you so much for reading it. I always worked really hard on the rhyme and how it flows, so I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you again!
Comment from donkeyoatey
What a great uplifting message! great flow to the words..they just roll off the tongue! thanks for choosing my artwork..a real honor! Donkeyoatey
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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What a great uplifting message! great flow to the words..they just roll off the tongue! thanks for choosing my artwork..a real honor! Donkeyoatey
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Are you kidding, Thank You!! Your photo was absolutely beautiful! Thank you so much for letting me "borrow" it:) Thank you for taking time to read my poem.
Comment from justatuna
In trying to learn more about acrostic poetry, I found your poem. Glad that I did. What a great job. I also appreciate your message. Thanks.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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In trying to learn more about acrostic poetry, I found your poem. Glad that I did. What a great job. I also appreciate your message. Thanks.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Wow! Thank you so much! I've only written a handful of Acrostics but I enjoy the challenge. You've made me glad I wrote this one. Thank you again! P.S. I'm glad you liked the message
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Fourth of July' is an extremely well-written and patriotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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'Fourth of July' is an extremely well-written and patriotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much! Your sweet review made it more than worth my effort. God bless you!!
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Suzie Q, you're more than welcome.
With my best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from squid152
Beautiful tribute the USA. Ya we have our problems but I too would not want to live anywhere else. The flag in your artwork says it all-Squid
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Beautiful tribute the USA. Ya we have our problems but I too would not want to live anywhere else. The flag in your artwork says it all-Squid
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking time to read it and I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you again!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Isn't it beautiful? I stand beside you.
We must keep that flag flying even if it is getting a little ragged from the turmoil and strife we have had the last four years. We will emerge strong again. God Bless America! Honeycomb
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Isn't it beautiful? I stand beside you.
We must keep that flag flying even if it is getting a little ragged from the turmoil and strife we have had the last four years. We will emerge strong again. God Bless America! Honeycomb
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you! I'm glad you feel the same way. Even with all the problems, it will always be my home. Thank you again!
Comment from Meta~Mark
nice job on your 4th of July poem and like these lines.. Freedom broke the chains..this is faith based and support of your country..
excellent!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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nice job on your 4th of July poem and like these lines.. Freedom broke the chains..this is faith based and support of your country..
excellent!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you again!!
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GOD BLESS AMERICA :)
Comment from October21
It's nice that you appreciate your country so much, and enjoy living there. I can't say I feel the same about England. It's like raining hell. Still, this is a nice poem, very informative and yet a bit of opinion creeping in there... :) well done
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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It's nice that you appreciate your country so much, and enjoy living there. I can't say I feel the same about England. It's like raining hell. Still, this is a nice poem, very informative and yet a bit of opinion creeping in there... :) well done
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you! I'm so sorry about your situation. I pray it gets better soon. Thank you again !
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I pray too. Bloody England. I need to come to the USA!:)
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Well pack your bags and come on!!
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I'm coming... wait... I just need to win the lottery first (BRB) :D
Comment from Ed_Anderson
The message of this poem is clear and concise. As you state din the authors note, even with all of the squabbling we do, this is still the best country to live in!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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The message of this poem is clear and concise. As you state din the authors note, even with all of the squabbling we do, this is still the best country to live in!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you! There is no other place I'd rather be. We'll get things straight here sooner or later. Thank you for reading it and I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
What a great tribute to what has become the symbol of freedom throughout the world. Others may denigrate or burn because their radicalism, stupidity and just plain jealousy.
Well done,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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What a great tribute to what has become the symbol of freedom throughout the world. Others may denigrate or burn because their radicalism, stupidity and just plain jealousy.
Well done,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you!! Hopefully it will always remain a symbol of freedom. Thank you again!!