The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Why Dad's Shoes?"A family learns their father is a serial killer
21 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Smurphy, I love this chapter. You set us up and then not give us an answer about those shoes! Clever clever my friend. Can't wait to read the next chapter and catch up. Excellent writing. xoxo d
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2012
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Hi Smurphy, I love this chapter. You set us up and then not give us an answer about those shoes! Clever clever my friend. Can't wait to read the next chapter and catch up. Excellent writing. xoxo d
Comment Written 26-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2012
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Thanks. You are almost at the end my friend.
Comment from Alaskastory
'Why Dad's Shoes?' is a chapter that proposes that question very well. I like James's effective conversations about it with both Charlie and his mom. I look forward to a possible solution in the next chapter. Marie
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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'Why Dad's Shoes?' is a chapter that proposes that question very well. I like James's effective conversations about it with both Charlie and his mom. I look forward to a possible solution in the next chapter. Marie
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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I had difficulty with this chapter...such a crazy subject. I am so pleased you found the dialogue effective and are looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment from Cranial Thinker
Wow!!! is this a case of the spell binding action that causes the truth to be shown right out in the open????My
this I still say should be a movie on the Big Screen as this is so very well written that it literally pulls at your
emotions by placing you right in the center of everything
going on in it....What a truly enjoyable read this was my friend....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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Wow!!! is this a case of the spell binding action that causes the truth to be shown right out in the open????My
this I still say should be a movie on the Big Screen as this is so very well written that it literally pulls at your
emotions by placing you right in the center of everything
going on in it....What a truly enjoyable read this was my friend....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2012
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I am so pleased you enjoyed this and thank you so much for the awesome 6 stars. I sincerely appreciate it. The book has only one of two more chapter. I am relieved it is finally finished.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Valerie:)
Grandmother's actions just get more curious with each new activity. Are shoes a part of some Romani curse or superstition? I doubt that Grandmother thinks her actions are strange at all.
I;m ready to find out what her secret plan is. I am out of sixes for another week or two, but as usual, I would give one two you for excellence, if I could.
Roger
1. Without waiting, Charlie pushed [passed ==> past] me and headed down the hallway. {Same commo passed/past error.}
2. Figuring out Grandmother was turning out to be far more difficult than any quantum physics class I'd taken. {The human factor in any equation complicates usually something far more than science or mathematics.}
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Hi Valerie:)
Grandmother's actions just get more curious with each new activity. Are shoes a part of some Romani curse or superstition? I doubt that Grandmother thinks her actions are strange at all.
I;m ready to find out what her secret plan is. I am out of sixes for another week or two, but as usual, I would give one two you for excellence, if I could.
Roger
1. Without waiting, Charlie pushed [passed ==> past] me and headed down the hallway. {Same commo passed/past error.}
2. Figuring out Grandmother was turning out to be far more difficult than any quantum physics class I'd taken. {The human factor in any equation complicates usually something far more than science or mathematics.}
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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You'd think by know I'd have lie/lay beside/next and all that cool stuff figured out...nope. Glad you liked this one.
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Smurphy
Sorry I'm running so far behind with my reviewing.
I'm on vacation in the USA until the end of August.
Will try to drop in on my laptop from time to time.
Ron
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Hi Smurphy
Sorry I'm running so far behind with my reviewing.
I'm on vacation in the USA until the end of August.
Will try to drop in on my laptop from time to time.
Ron
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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No apologies necessary. Have a great vacation.
Comment from psalmist
Great chapter, Smurph. Reeling with unusual and strange behavior, intrigue and questions that leave me wanting more. I felt for James. Like my highly intelligent son who is not bothered by complex math or music, he nevertheless is stymied by human behavior. Well done, and you keep me wanting more. Linda
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Great chapter, Smurph. Reeling with unusual and strange behavior, intrigue and questions that leave me wanting more. I felt for James. Like my highly intelligent son who is not bothered by complex math or music, he nevertheless is stymied by human behavior. Well done, and you keep me wanting more. Linda
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for your awesome review. I always look forward to your comments.
Comment from RebelRose
No need to email me the posts. I am stll getting them via private message on this site. I just checked and was surprised that I still can. What does that "Are you human mean?" on your posts? This is a great chapter. I am reallyanxious to find out what the deal is. She must have put some kind of spell on Alexandru.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2012
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No need to email me the posts. I am stll getting them via private message on this site. I just checked and was surprised that I still can. What does that "Are you human mean?" on your posts? This is a great chapter. I am reallyanxious to find out what the deal is. She must have put some kind of spell on Alexandru.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2012
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Where did you see "Are you human?". I have no idea what that refers to. Glad you continue to get the posts. Let me know if you stop getting them.
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It shows up in the box where I rate and review. It says "Are you human?" and gets you to solve a math equation. I did not solve it and it gave me that woman (the one who says your review is too short) and said to back up and solve the equation before it would let me send the review. Maybe it is because I am no a premier member an it thinks I may be a computer or something. It is really odd.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Now you've really got my curiosity going. I can't wait for you to reveal the mystery of the shoes. I have a feeling it's going to be quite clever though Giddy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2012
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Now you've really got my curiosity going. I can't wait for you to reveal the mystery of the shoes. I have a feeling it's going to be quite clever though Giddy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2012
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We are near the end so you won't have to wait long to find out what Grandmother is up to.
Comment from Joan E.
Angela gave wise advice and I liked your playing on the "shoes" scenario and Charlie's sarcasm as a defense mechanism. I now see how you could combine the previous chapter with this one, as you mentioned. You have once again built up the suspense, and we can't wait to hear James' next conversation with Grandmother. -Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2012
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Angela gave wise advice and I liked your playing on the "shoes" scenario and Charlie's sarcasm as a defense mechanism. I now see how you could combine the previous chapter with this one, as you mentioned. You have once again built up the suspense, and we can't wait to hear James' next conversation with Grandmother. -Joan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2012
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I am pleased you enjoyed this one. We are near the end so ou won't have to wait long to find out what Grandmother is up to.
Comment from Veronica Grace
Another captivating chapter and leaving me wanting more. I like the grandmother character, she piques my interest. A well written chapter nothing to change or crit.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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Another captivating chapter and leaving me wanting more. I like the grandmother character, she piques my interest. A well written chapter nothing to change or crit.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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Thank you once again. I am so pleased you are enjoying this story. The next several chapters will contain a lot more information about Grandmother...yes, she is quite a character.