The Eden Tree
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "The Wedding"A family's need of a miracle is in a Box
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Comment from bowls
Another detailed description written to enable your reader to picture the layout easily. You seem to be showing all to be neat and orderly in these last few chapters, a strong contrast with the chaos of the kidnapping plot and a good way to vary the texture of the read. Nice touch of humour at the end, as well. You've utilized a reference that everyone would be familiar with.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012
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Another detailed description written to enable your reader to picture the layout easily. You seem to be showing all to be neat and orderly in these last few chapters, a strong contrast with the chaos of the kidnapping plot and a good way to vary the texture of the read. Nice touch of humour at the end, as well. You've utilized a reference that everyone would be familiar with.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from TammyGail
and yet another.. excellent work on this chapter as well, your closing was one I found to be ever funny.. well written and expressed like always..thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012
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and yet another.. excellent work on this chapter as well, your closing was one I found to be ever funny.. well written and expressed like always..thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 16-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Art Caf© I don't know why this happens, but all throughout cafe is that way.
I love the ending. Well written, interesting and enjoyable chapter!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012
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Art Caf© I don't know why this happens, but all throughout cafe is that way.
I love the ending. Well written, interesting and enjoyable chapter!!! Debbie
Comment Written 16-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012
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I have amended it, thanks for the help. I also dont know why it happens sometimes. Thank you for your kind words!
Comment from twiddledee
Very discriptive, one feels right at home at the art@cafe, but the cashbox for "goods?" there should be a better word for it.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012
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Very discriptive, one feels right at home at the art@cafe, but the cashbox for "goods?" there should be a better word for it.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012
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Thank you for your very kind review and help.