Comment from bowls

Excellent

Ah, you're picking up another thread. It's nice to know how all those companies established earlier will be tied together and operate. The additional information about the Porsche event is an interesting detail, as well. In your second last sentence the verb should be "were saved", not "was saved" to agree in number with the subject "bytes". (The phrase "of information" does not affect the verb.) Coming along nicely!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2012

Thanks for your persistent reading and help as ever!

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Well written. No spags noted. Interesting and enjoyable. Fiance has that funny copyright symbol in it-as it always does-don't know what the answer to that is. Anyway, good chapter~Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2012

Thanks, Debbie, for your kind review, Peter

Comment from vivicadad

Excellent

Nice chapter. Well written and i particularly like your clarity on the security setup subject on the computers. Being a computer geek i can clearly see you got that pinned down really good.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2012

Thank you for your kind and helpful review.