The Eden Tree
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "A Break At Woolacombe"A family's need of a miracle is in a Box
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Comment from bowls
You provide some interesting commentary on ageing and attitudes toward ageing here. We're also given even more insight into the narrator's character. His is certainly a kind, compassionate man while being very practical at the same time. I wonder if, in paragraph three, you should capitalize both Morgan and Steel since that's the proper name of the company.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2012
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You provide some interesting commentary on ageing and attitudes toward ageing here. We're also given even more insight into the narrator's character. His is certainly a kind, compassionate man while being very practical at the same time. I wonder if, in paragraph three, you should capitalize both Morgan and Steel since that's the proper name of the company.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2012
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Thank you for your ever-helpful and encouraging words.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good and well written story . The story is true to life. How many couples, who have lived in the same house all their live, end up having to leave because of circumstances. A well written and enjoyable story. Mary
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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A good and well written story . The story is true to life. How many couples, who have lived in the same house all their live, end up having to leave because of circumstances. A well written and enjoyable story. Mary
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Thank you for your very kind words.
Comment from Taffspride
Once again you have brought this work to life. Like the previous piece of yours that I read, this chapter also flows well. Your great descriptive abilities truly draws your readers in.
I suffered a shock when I read this chapter, I know Ebbw Vale well, As for the (Royal)Gwent on Cardiff Road, I can picture it now. Obviously because of these references I want to read more of this story.
Ddiolch yn fawr, for this great story.
Iechyd da, Taffspride.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Once again you have brought this work to life. Like the previous piece of yours that I read, this chapter also flows well. Your great descriptive abilities truly draws your readers in.
I suffered a shock when I read this chapter, I know Ebbw Vale well, As for the (Royal)Gwent on Cardiff Road, I can picture it now. Obviously because of these references I want to read more of this story.
Ddiolch yn fawr, for this great story.
Iechyd da, Taffspride.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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thank you very much for your kind review. my wife in real life is from Sirhowy, Tredegar, so I know some of that area.
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I know that area also. I was from Newport originally, that is how I knew the Royal Gwent. I am so looking forward to reading more of you novel. Keep up the great work.
Happy Writings.
Taffspride.